dead...

October 27, 2009
By wheelit SILVER, Boyne, Michigan
wheelit SILVER, Boyne, Michigan
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Fire flames
darkness and fear
lost and confused
were am i to go?
how can one simple
Really simple thing
Just lead to this?
One mistake
And now
Now
Now I am dead…



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on Nov. 18 2009 at 2:58 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

izz123 GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:06 pm
izz123 GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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Very powerful message. It leaves you wondering about the mistake the narrator made. Nice work. Can't wait to read more. Please let me know what you think of some of my work.


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