dead...

October 27, 2009
Fire flames
darkness and fear
lost and confused
were am i to go?
how can one simple
Really simple thing
Just lead to this?
One mistake
And now
Now
Now I am dead…





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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 2:58 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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izz123 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 6:06 pm
Very powerful message. It leaves you wondering about the mistake the narrator made. Nice work. Can't wait to read more. Please let me know what you think of some of my work.
 
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