down from the rain

October 27, 2009
By wheelit SILVER, Boyne, Michigan
wheelit SILVER, Boyne, Michigan
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Down down down
Down falls the rain
In a form like my tear drop
I stand on out
Let it hit me
I close my eyes and think of you
no more sorrow
Down down down
Down falls the rain

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Hallow SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 10:36 am
Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Most people don't know how they're gonna feel from one moment to the next, but a dope fiend has a pretty good idea. They just look at the labels on the little bottles.

I really like this. It is short, but in a good way. The poem leaves mystery and a wistful longing for more to this story. Good job.


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