I Wish That She Were Mine

October 26, 2009
By , Dhaka, Bangladesh
A million words couldn’t make her mine, I tried…
A million tears could neither, I cried.
Of all the sad endings of this world’s tragedies,
The saddest one just had to be one of my love stories!

All things are made in pairs- for so has my Lord said,
If she wasn’t meant to be mine, then why had I been made?
And such blasphemous questions came creeping to my mind
My love had made me mad; my love had turned me blind.

And my fake smile did little, to hide the struggle within me
I was not with her, how could I be happy?
I asked Allah for Mercy! I was in need of it….
And then I fell out of love, slowly bit by bit.

But then I met this girl I knew and simply went insane!
Her lips, her eyes, her glorious smile put me in love again.
Its love unlike any other, much stronger than before,
I only wish to have her, I ask for little more.
O Lord answer my prayer: Bring us together!
And let my love be in my arms forever and ever…





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cree8ive said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 9:08 pm
i like how you really convey such powerful strong emotion. the one thing i would work on is chosing words that fit the mood of the peace and maybe a little bit more flow.
 
Jade-McKaye replied...
May 3, 2010 at 10:07 am
i agree, its really good but you should work on how your words flow together.
 
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