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September MAG

October 26, 2009
By Talmage BRONZE, Salt Lake City, Utah
Talmage BRONZE, Salt Lake City, Utah
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September sneaks in with her fiery red hair,
Green twinkling eyes with flecks of gold,
Olive-colored skin, tall and thin like an aspen,
She speaks like wind rustling through the trees,
She twirls and spins like the leaves drifting to the ground,
The frost takes over – she now has no bright leaves
She prances away waiting for next year to come and show her colors.



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on May. 6 2010 at 5:32 am
sammie1997 GOLD, Winslow, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
never say goodbye
because goodbye means leaving
and leaving means forgetting
-petter pan

I remember I had to chose a month and do personification to it as well. Mine sucked compared to yours. Yours is sooooo pretty!!!! I can actually SEE september :) good job

on May. 5 2010 at 2:44 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Wow. I love how you used such great personification. You made Septemeber alive and showed her to me.

on May. 1 2010 at 11:01 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

This is amazing 5 stars please read some of my work and let me know what you thikn thanks =)

on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:50 pm
blackwidow BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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This is awsome! i can almost see september.