BEFORE & NOW

October 26, 2009
bounce bounce,
goes the ball on the floor,
knock knock,
there someone knocking on the door.
i open up,
and whut do i see,
a reflection of somebody,
is that me?
a criminal individual,
with no sense of life,
walking around his neighborhood,
looking 4 a fight.
a knife in his hand,
many weapons he stole,
people scared of him,
cuz their souls he owned.
i seen the devil,
in the blink of an eye,
a complexion reflection,
with no sense of light.
ready to die,
for the streets as his love,
no mercy at his feet,
nor at his gun.


~thats what he seen,i guess the knock was an awakening cuz this is how it is now.~


bounce bounce,
the ball hits the ground,
people walk around,
happy and proud.
a sense of light,
is all that there is,
god has blessed his life,
with her delicate kiss.
knives are down,
he owns no more guns,
his feets on the clouds,
an endless trans of love.
below he could see,
all that she changed,
the sun after the rain,
blossoms came his way.
each with her affection,
how he knew they were true,
all i could say,
is she made him brand new.





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Dark_Beauty said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 8:58 pm
Hi Lil_Soldier ur poem is really good. It makes think of my older bro.
 
Lil_Soldier replied...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 3:30 pm
thank u Dark_Beauty..this poem is acturally based on my sister and her boyfriend..=]
but im happy u liked it..=]
 
Dark_Beauty replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 6:52 pm
ur welcome but, u never answered my reply on "i can't think of a title".
 
Lil_Soldier replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 9:02 pm
o my bad i'll check it out right now...=]
 
Hannahbear said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 4:17 pm
o wow, this is awesome. i was so excited to see that sum of yur work wuz on here! This is f'in amazing bra. keep writing def. yer really gonna go somewhere in life wit your kinda talkent..its so deep n meaningful, somethin like nobody can pull off, i love it
 
Hannahbear said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 4:13 pm
o my god! this shit is so good...i loves it :)
 
Hannahbear replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 10:21 pm
lolz...i didnt really mean to post two thingys on here, lol mb...now i put 3 on here, lol i have no life ;)
 
Lil_Soldier replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 12:48 pm
lolz thanx hannahbear..=]
 
Hannahbear replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 6:25 pm
haha... yup :D
 
Hannahbear<3 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 6:51 pm
would you PLEASE GET ON HERE!!!!? ;)
 
Hannahbear<3 replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 9:39 pm
='( could you get on here??? i miss you soo bad, seriously you havnt been on here in forever... grrrrr i miss u
 
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