I Saw Her Crying Through The Rain-Spattered Window

October 22, 2009
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I saw her crying through the rain-spattered window
The wind snatched at her hair and exposed her expression
She was brittle and breaking in the temper of the heavens
The pieces of beliefs she tried to maintain trailed in her wake

I saw her crying through the rain-spattered window
And I saw a phantom of myself

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Darling,:* said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 9:14 pm
That was really good :) I liked how it wasn't all long and ugly and monotonous. It was just short and nice and meaningful and there weren't really any unnecessary lines. Nice.(:
StephiePoo said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 3:19 pm
Wow. That was amazing. Your a great writer!
lgrs_88 said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 12:16 pm
Okay, wow. I don't know why but this poem REALLY hit me. I love it. Just wish it was longer. Love it!! Keep writing!
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