That Girl

October 19, 2009
By LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Oooh! Dark matter, we better bring a flashlight!"


She’s that girl you hear about, and now she’s falling down.
People push her all around, but they can’t keep her on the ground.
She tries and tries to stay upright, but they will not end the fight.
So she holds, she holds on tight, she will not fall into the night.

The author's comments:
Every school, has that girl

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RiaRen SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 10:58 pm
RiaRen SILVER, New Bothwell, Other
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k, so this is one of the shortest poems i've yet read on teenink, but i don't think you need to add anymore. you hit it spot on and im super happy that i got to read this. i AM "that girl" and will always be, and having someone put it into such... powerful and honest words makes being that girl that much easier to be ok with.

on Oct. 29 2009 at 10:28 pm
LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Oooh! Dark matter, we better bring a flashlight!"

"That girl" is a girl that is never good enough for other people, and she gets made fun of and pushed around, and because she is different people try to make her life harder, but she doesnt change, and she stays strong...always

on Oct. 27 2009 at 8:03 pm
i can relate to that girl... your good

halls SILVER said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 6:31 pm
halls SILVER, Harrison City, Pennsylvania
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This piece is so true and inspirational. I like the last line and how it says, so she holds, she holds on tight, she will not fall into the light. That line really makes you see how the girl in the poem may not be so strong on the outside but on the inside she is like a brave soldier. In some ways you can almost compare the girl to a cockroach, because you say they cant keep her down, which is like how people say you cant kill cockroaches.

on Oct. 27 2009 at 1:45 pm
MayaChristine GOLD, Stocksfield, Other
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I love this! I am totally "that girl" and I love it that someone has finally put it into words. Thank you, =)

on Oct. 27 2009 at 12:35 pm
cheerdanceguard09 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
there are 3 things a girl needs in life love to make her weak alcohol to make her strong and best friends when both things make her hit the floor

wow I love this poem it so describes me finally someone put it into words

lizzers4444 said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 10:21 am
I consider myself "that girl" but I'm not sure if you and I are referring to the same thing here...

Can you please describe this kind of girl... i feel like i can relate but I'm not sure.

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:40 am
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

i AM that girl..... n for somebody 2 b able 2 put it into words is evn bettr then knowing someone understands

on Oct. 27 2009 at 5:39 am
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
32 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

Hey! This post is pretty amazing. I totally agree and sometimes I feel like I'm that girl, but I know everyone feels like that sometimes. Good work

on Oct. 26 2009 at 10:33 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
20 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

wow this makes me feel..someting. idk what i just feel.


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