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The Many Faces of _____

sometimes he's happy
sometimes he's sad
sometimes he's selfish, repugnant, or mad
sometimes he silly
sometimes he's not
all I know is that i love him a lot





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BlackHoleHighAlum This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 9:41 pm
Ah, this ones cute! Great job, I love it! :) :)
 
Jellybean9898 said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 4:12 pm
short sweet and to the point.  cute and happy.  i liked it great job
 
Francheska said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 12:42 pm
i really like this one
 
Jasmine said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 6:16 pm
I love ths poem. its simple but it says a lot.
 
sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:09 pm
I like that you use words like selfish and repugnant, but the rest of it seems pretty basic and that throws me off a bit.
 
*StandardToaster* replied...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:23 pm
hey sammy thanks for the comment. i know that my vocabulary in this poem isn't very broad so thanks for the constructive criticism! i'll try to improve on it.
 
jeanwolf said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 7:09 pm
i love this!! way cool!!
 
*StandardToaster* replied...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:23 pm
well thank you!
 
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