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I wish I could have danced with cinderella that day
she looked as pretty as the month of may


but I was sad becasue I had to leave the nest day


I wanted to be the king and she could be the queen ,but I was not even price charming


she dance like there was care
but all I could do was stare

I like cinderella she is a wonderful person I think i might lover her


but she doesnt notice me ,but still I dont bother

cinderrela allways looks so pretty

but she doesn't like me

what a pitty





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cleverthinkah said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 9:19 pm
this has potential.
 
bennyB replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 6:48 pm
thank you foyour coment
 
LRachel said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 6:05 pm
:] <3 <3 <3 i wish i was somebody's cinderella. i really like your poem!!! if i had to say anything, just the spelling typos, but everyone does that sometimes. i love it!!! esp. "i wanted to be the king and she could be the queen, but i was not even prince charming."
 
bennyB replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 6:50 pm
thank you for the coment
 
one of us said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 8:12 am
awww this is sweet :)
 
bennyB replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 6:51 pm
thnak youfor your coment
 
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