I wish I could have daced with cinderella

October 14, 2009
By bennyB PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
bennyB PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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I wish I could have danced with cinderella that day
she looked as pretty as the month of may


but I was sad becasue I had to leave the nest day


I wanted to be the king and she could be the queen ,but I was not even price charming


she dance like there was care
but all I could do was stare

I like cinderella she is a wonderful person I think i might lover her


but she doesnt notice me ,but still I dont bother

cinderrela allways looks so pretty

but she doesn't like me

what a pitty


The author's comments:
this is my favorte piece is about agirl ke I knowit sounds corny but is the only love poem I ever made I dot really make loe poems

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 6:51 pm
bennyB PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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thnak youfor your coment

on Oct. 29 2009 at 6:50 pm
bennyB PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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thank you for the coment

on Oct. 29 2009 at 6:48 pm
bennyB PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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thank you foyour coment

on Oct. 26 2009 at 9:19 pm
this has potential.

LRachel BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 6:05 pm
LRachel BRONZE, Holmdel, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams."

:] <3 <3 <3 i wish i was somebody's cinderella. i really like your poem!!! if i had to say anything, just the spelling typos, but everyone does that sometimes. i love it!!! esp. "i wanted to be the king and she could be the queen, but i was not even prince charming."

one of us said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 8:12 am
awww this is sweet :)


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