Stab In the Back

October 13, 2009
By KassidyAnn SILVER, Manhattan, Kansas
KassidyAnn SILVER, Manhattan, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
“Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."- Christopher Robin to Pooh


The piercing pain was sharp and deep.
From the gleaming dagger, dripped
sadness, heart-break, and frustration.
As the last bits of patience disappeared from view.



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on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:52 pm
KassidyAnn SILVER, Manhattan, Kansas
9 articles 5 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."- Christopher Robin to Pooh

I wish that I could remember the day and what was going through my head exactly when I wrote this. Even now when I look at it, I kind of surprise myself at the pain I must have been feeling.

Kst8 Gram said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 1:04 pm
Wow! I can see and hear your pain!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 9:18 am
This is amazing. The analogy takes me right to your pain.


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