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October 17, 2009
By igotchucks92 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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"Do not fear death, but rather the unlived life."

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You're not here.
I see your face in my mind.
But you're not here.
You can't catch me now.
You can't laugh at my stupid jokes.
You can't talk me down.
And I can't breathe.
Why did you leave me?
Why do you love her?
Why can't I just move on?
You're not here.
And I still am.
Stuck.

© Charlie W., Bethesda, MD

The author's comments:
I write a lot about break up. I've had a lot of experience. And I'm still hurting form one from a year ago.
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StandardToaster PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 7:55 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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this is pretty good. nice job keep writing!
igotchucks92 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 5:04 pm
igotchucks92 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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I actually write most of my poems about this one guy I dated. Just every time I think about him, I become extremely inspired.
jenx0x3 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 4:02 pm
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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I can really relate to this i had a bad breakuo and i was stuck on that one guy for three years!! but now i am moving on finally
Writedancelove&live GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 11:23 pm
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Wow this is really good. I've had some experiences just like this, and i'm tearing up right now...