The words you say

the words you say keep me here they keep me sane
each time I see you I know that I am safe
you are my dream my celebrity my everything
I can't keep the smile off my face or the laughter out of my voice
you tell me I'm pretty I believe you tell me I'm sweet I listen
you stop me from going to far
you know what I mean when I say I can't handle him
you listen and you hear something no one else has done
I can't sit here in silence no more
I need to tell you the truth I need to tell you how I feel
what I know and why I can't let you go





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gman said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 8:19 pm
Its really good
 
alfavetta said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 6:54 am
I like it. The only change I would make to it is that you should add punctuation so it is easier to read.
 
kittkattbarr replied...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 7:36 pm
Yeah, I understand were your coming from. I normally have it formated differently so the punctuation doesn't matter
 
anotherromanctic This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 7:10 pm
i love it. there's nothing else to say(:
 
kittkattbarr replied...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 11:02 pm
Thank you, but I do like constructive criticism
 
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