The words you say

October 11, 2009
By kittkattbarr PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kittkattbarr PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
25 articles 10 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
-RF


the words you say keep me here they keep me sane
each time I see you I know that I am safe
you are my dream my celebrity my everything
I can't keep the smile off my face or the laughter out of my voice
you tell me I'm pretty I believe you tell me I'm sweet I listen
you stop me from going to far
you know what I mean when I say I can't handle him
you listen and you hear something no one else has done
I can't sit here in silence no more
I need to tell you the truth I need to tell you how I feel
what I know and why I can't let you go


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gman said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 8:19 pm
Its really good

on Nov. 3 2009 at 11:02 pm
kittkattbarr PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
25 articles 10 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
-RF

Thank you, but I do like constructive criticism

on Oct. 26 2009 at 7:36 pm
kittkattbarr PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
25 articles 10 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
-RF

Yeah, I understand were your coming from. I normally have it formated differently so the punctuation doesn't matter

on Oct. 20 2009 at 6:54 am
nevercliche159 BRONZE, Clark, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man who has nothing to die for, is not fit to live."
--- Martin Luther King Jr.

I like it. The only change I would make to it is that you should add punctuation so it is easier to read.

on Oct. 18 2009 at 7:10 pm
anotherromanctic PLATINUM, Wilmington, North Carolina
29 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it's not okay, then it's not over." - Anonymous

i love it. there's nothing else to say(:


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