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October 9, 2009
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she pushes me.
against the
i hit hard.
against them,
her budies
rush over,
to pin me down.
as I wince,
she punched me
in the face,
blood trickled.
I cryed out in.
as i recieved
another blow from her,
she aimed for the stomach,
I wanted to clutch it,
to ease the pain...
but it was impossible.
her budies were way to strong.
for me,
and I.
was to weak,
i recieved blow after blow,
each time.
harder then the next,
I don't know.
how much time.
had passed,
but i was covered in pain.
and in blood,
when she was finished.
i crumpled to the ground,
she smirked,
"thats what you are.
A dirty little loser.
go back to the pits of hell..."
as she walked away a tear trickled down my blooded face,
"thats what I am.
A dirty little loser..."

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BMMSKC said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:41 pm
misswindsor replied...
May 12, 2010 at 4:06 pm
i don't think tat you're a dirty little loser and i don't even know you and i'm telling you that you not a dirty loser.
forgottenangel replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 11:26 am
Wow! amazing. i love love it.
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