September 30, 2009
The force of forever
Keeps you so close
Never intended to be let go
Yet you have escaped and disappeared
Into the magic of emptiness
What is beyond here
In this never ending depth?
I wait for you to return to me
And join the emotions of joy and grief
But I am silenced by infinity

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Inkspired said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 5:16 pm
short is good as well! it shows that you can condense your feelings, and you've done that so well! I love your ideas, they're so original!
thedeadpoet said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 12:06 pm
Your poetry is good....2 stanzas is alright but you should lengthen your feelings into more stanzas. it will allow people to feel what your feeling in your poetry.. its more dramatic try it sometime
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