September 30, 2009
By InfinityRose SILVER, Ambler, Pennsylvania
InfinityRose SILVER, Ambler, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

The force of forever
Keeps you so close
Never intended to be let go
Yet you have escaped and disappeared
Into the magic of emptiness
What is beyond here
In this never ending depth?
I wait for you to return to me
And join the emotions of joy and grief
But I am silenced by infinity

The author's comments:
Stars. Gravity. Love.

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on Oct. 16 2009 at 5:16 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

short is good as well! it shows that you can condense your feelings, and you've done that so well! I love your ideas, they're so original!

on Oct. 16 2009 at 12:06 pm
BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
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Your poetry is good....2 stanzas is alright but you should lengthen your feelings into more stanzas. it will allow people to feel what your feeling in your poetry.. its more dramatic try it sometime


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