October 4, 2009
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I feel like feces in a toilet
unwanted and flushed away
like a rotten egg; scorned
cracked and then thrown away
maybe even like spoiled milk
one taste and i make you sick;
then i'm thrown away
i'm like a bugger in your nose
you just got to get rid of me
like pigeon poop
you wouldn't want me to touch you
it's funny
because to me, you're
like a million bucks
i'll want you all the days of my life
but to you;
i'm just a tissue
that you use
and then,

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LovelyLynn said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 12:58 am
It was okay, but don't get me wrong I like it, except the whole comparisons kind of discusted me, not all of them. just the first one, I had a mental picture. haha you're very good at writing, keep up the good work dollface!(:
TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 10:11 pm
OMG this is brilliant and it is comedic whether you meant it to be or not and it has EXCELLENT comparisons and cool ending. I love it. KEEP writing.
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