Cupid's Pitchfork MAG

October 2, 2009
By xxBoneless BRONZE, Arab, Alabama
xxBoneless BRONZE, Arab, Alabama
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Here we are. You're pins, I'm needles. Let's play. Here we are. You want this? Then come on..tune out everyone in the crowd because now it's just me and you." -Deftones, 'Needles and Pins'

So I kind of fell in love.
Broke both my legs in the process.
As if you haven't taken enough,
Half my heart is tucked away in your pocket.
It beats against your leg and screams every time you kiss her.
I can still feel it breaking.

The author's comments:
Really not all that much to say about this.

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on Apr. 5 2013 at 4:19 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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- Martin Luther King Jr.

You built such imagery and power with this! Really great job!

on May. 28 2012 at 7:04 pm
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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The tone here is great- casual yet bitter and full of emotion. Good job.

on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:37 pm
Saudade_indigo PLATINUM, Winnipeg, Other
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wow...i love it

on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:21 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson

amazing poem


on Jul. 24 2010 at 2:05 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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simplistic but moving.  im sorry if this is a true story.  but if it is any consolation it is an amazing poem... 

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on Feb. 10 2010 at 1:10 pm
TheRealMe GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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This is so simple but it is so good and i reallly like it. Great job


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