October 1, 2009

Beautiful stars which glitter, twinkle, and spark
A flaring beauty which glows in the dark
Millions of them shine and make you wonder
What is it really you are standing under?
There power so bright
It truly shows a remarkable sight
An enchanted light
Which stands out in the night
Whenever you’re lonely or just don’t know who you are
Remember deep inside everyone is a star

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Rkingett This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 7:43 pm
ok. simple yet strong and ponderous! love it! is that even a real word? anyway, i don't see why this isn't published because its just so awe... well, its awe. there could b some things that could be cut, like in the first sentance i thinnk that which, could have been cut, and replaced with nothing... literally, nothing... just my thoughts. i can't actually read the print mag because they don't have it in tape or in braile.
BrittneySamantha replied...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 7:58 pm
thank u :D your right. it does sound better without the 1st sentence
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