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Ashes in the Wind

You're so close
and our lips meet
but it means nothing
Flesh upon flesh
means nothing
to you

Me?
I'm entirely different
Lips upon lips
Embers upon ashes
our souls intertwining

We're both warm
but I create the heat
and you receive it
absorb it
FEEL it
but you don't produce it
when I'm gone you just fly away with the wind



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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 2:48 pm:
I loved this poem. It was beautiful.
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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KiraKira replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 6:56 pm :
Beautiful! I love it! It flows nicely, and the overall feeling is clear. :)
 
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