I'm Okay

By Zero_K, moosic, PA

I've been to the bottom
and bounced back up
I've fallen to the rocks
to be saved by the sea
And I'm surrounded by faces
that somehow forgive me
And I just want to let you know
I'm okay
(Maybe)

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starxoxo23 said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 8:52 am:

AMAZING. this is sooo beautiful and i can relate perfectly

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silent-is-loud said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 3:54 pm:

thiisss iissss grrreatt!! i love the ending.

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dreamer_believer said...
May 18, 2010 at 10:13 am:

awesome! your work always impresses me :) it has a really good rhythm, and it's really creative and different in a good way. this piece is almost like your trying to convince yourself you are okay :) great job!! i love it.

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EdytD said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 9:47 pm:

This is actually really neat - I love the rhythm and flow. I think it's an interesting last line, especially with the parenthesis. I think with a bit of imagery of how you "survived your fall" - minor cuts, stitched bleeding, etc, that gives the idea of a put-back-together wound, either physically or mentally. Great job!