Darkness

September 18, 2009
By xXxMonicaxXx BRONZE, La Porte, Indiana
xXxMonicaxXx BRONZE, La Porte, Indiana
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black as night; yet light as day
the words to speak;I hear you say
your last wish;to be with me
hold me close;while out at sea
as fire burns;all throughout the land
I am here;to lend a hand
so when darkness fills;all the eyes
you'll see my love;the blood red skies
a kiss goodbye;a kiss each night
you'll see my dear; a lovely sight
the moon will rise;high in the skies
and darkness will fill;everybody's eyes



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on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:51 pm
wow, this is sooooooooooo amazing!) love the pic.

on Sep. 27 2009 at 5:12 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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wow. this is amazing :)

on Sep. 27 2009 at 2:30 pm
Sunset17 SILVER, New City, New York
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The way it flowed was incredible and i loved it! great imagery!

on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:50 am
NessieMarie GOLD, Minonk, Illinois
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i love itt.

nastya said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:11 pm
nice, u got talentt

nastya said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:09 pm
just trying

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on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:28 pm
the-optimist, Longview, Texas
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Interesting writing style! i love it! :) keep writing!

on Sep. 26 2009 at 11:02 am
<3Jasmine BRONZE, Morehead, Kentucky
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love this poem it's good!!!!

on Sep. 26 2009 at 9:02 am
Sarah♥ SILVER, Milford, Connecticut
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that's really good; I love it!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 7:07 pm
Madisynyoung BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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wow that was a really good poem

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on Sep. 25 2009 at 2:28 pm
wow...........

pgossett said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 11:24 am
nice story


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