Darkness

black as night; yet light as day
the words to speak;I hear you say
your last wish;to be with me
hold me close;while out at sea
as fire burns;all throughout the land
I am here;to lend a hand
so when darkness fills;all the eyes
you'll see my love;the blood red skies
a kiss goodbye;a kiss each night
you'll see my dear; a lovely sight
the moon will rise;high in the skies
and darkness will fill;everybody's eyes





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BrooklynnBlue said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 10:51 pm
wow, this is sooooooooooo amazing!) love the pic.
 
blackamethyst said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 5:12 pm
wow. this is amazing :)
 
Alexandra K. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 2:30 pm
The way it flowed was incredible and i loved it! great imagery!
 
NessieMarie said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 10:50 am
i love itt.
 
nastya said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 8:09 pm
just trying
 
nastya replied...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 8:11 pm
nice, u got talentt
 
the-optimist said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 6:28 pm
Interesting writing style! i love it! :) keep writing!
 
<3Jasmine said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 11:02 am
love this poem it's good!!!!
 
Sarah♥ said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 9:02 am
that's really good; I love it!
 
. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 2:28 pm
wow...........
 
Madisyn Y. replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 7:07 pm
wow that was a really good poem
 
pgossett said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 11:24 am
nice story
 
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