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i hate and i like

i like how you say sweet things
i hate how its never enough
i like how you always talk to me
i hate you never have enough time
i like how you care about others
i hate how you defend your exgirl friend even after all of what she did ....



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Nov. 11, 2009 at 3:45 pm:
good poem! your name wouldnt happen to be helena would it?
 
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Stephanie F. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 8:51 pm:
i've been through that situation. its tough. i like the poem. keep on writing
 
ajibike This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 10:35 am :
Short and sweet!
I really felt the impact of what you were saying. So nice job. I have a few suggestions; the first four lines, they kind of mirror the other--it's a little repetitive, but I see how that's difficult to adjust. Because "sweet things" and simple talking are of course different. I really liked the last two lines, I thought they were pretty strong. =)
 
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