i hate and i like

September 17, 2009
By smileysdeadvalentine GOLD, San Bernardino, California
smileysdeadvalentine GOLD, San Bernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"you like audry hepburn,harry houdinni and croket you can't swim, you can't dance and you don't know karate face you'll never gonna make it" "i dont want to make it"


i like how you say sweet things
i hate how its never enough
i like how you always talk to me
i hate you never have enough time
i like how you care about others
i hate how you defend your exgirl friend even after all of what she did ....


The author's comments:
every girl who has been in a relationship can relate to this poem....even though we don't admitt it has happened to all of us in some way, and i wrote it for us girls who have been in this situtation.

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on Nov. 11 2009 at 3:45 pm
good poem! your name wouldnt happen to be helena would it?

on Sep. 29 2009 at 10:35 am
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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Short and sweet!

I really felt the impact of what you were saying. So nice job. I have a few suggestions; the first four lines, they kind of mirror the other--it's a little repetitive, but I see how that's difficult to adjust. Because "sweet things" and simple talking are of course different. I really liked the last two lines, I thought they were pretty strong. =)

on Sep. 27 2009 at 8:51 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i've been through that situation. its tough. i like the poem. keep on writing


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