sounds of the street

June 17, 2009
You ebb and you flow
Forever you go
So strait yet so great
So modern yet majestic
a whiz and a bang
a zoom and a thud
the sound of a car that drives through the mud
on engine
on tires
on windshield
on headlights
we must fly by the night
and deliver people to all

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Kumang said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 6:05 am
This is pretty good, it has rhymes which i like.. lol and i like that pic, i like pics of the sky and stuff.. lol it looks soooo kewl!!! 500 Stars!! lol theres non jus 5.. lol its GOOOOD!!! hehe
RebeccaA said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 10:23 am
This poem sounds a bit religious, but it is good. The lines are not divided well, but it is short and sweet to the point.
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