The Wanting

September 6, 2009
By marty7 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
marty7 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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it's like a fire burning so raviushly through a forest eating at away every small creatuer that dares to cross my path.His eyes that run over me so deeply and slow like moltin lava moving down a mountain.What is this feeling tugging at my heart, causing it skip it's beat.What is this making me turn my head so steadly at this boy no,man.Who is he?,what is he and why is he torrmenting me? That body,that face,his smile , oh gosh that laugh! it's driving me insane!! I DON'T EVEN KNOW HIS NAME!! wait i do i know you,but if i dare say, its like admiting defeat,that i can nolonger stand on my own two feet happily.He come's closer like and lion on the hunt,eyes so firecly striken with hunger. He looks familar,like i've seen that exprrsion's so....wanting,burning,no flaming brighter than anything i've seen before. he looks like me. that look in his eyes so.. mirroed. then i know that this buring will only slow down one way. i grab for this body and never let go. i dare not, because the fire will arise again..

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Shenkel15 GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 3:47 pm
Shenkel15 GOLD, Pevely, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Welcome to a celebration of truth, beauty, freedom, and above all things, love.~Moulin Rouge!

Every person has a mask; you have to look beyond the mask to see the person~Unknown

Reality is a lovely place, but I wouldn't want to live there. ~Adam Young

Very descriptive and deep. Loved it!

bobbyj said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 2:08 pm
cool very good work

on Sep. 16 2009 at 12:35 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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i like it!!! very good work!!!:P

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