Where Did you Go?

September 7, 2009
By RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
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I swear I saw you in my house the night before....

Where did you go?

I swear you Hugged me right before you left...Then slowly walked away leaving your shadow only...

Where did you go?

I swear the night before you were having the time of your life as you dwelled with happiness as
your family members surrounded
you.

Where did you go?

I swear everything went by too fast.

Where did you go?

I swear all that was there the next day was your tattered clothing and your collection of camera's...

Where did you go...You went into those wonders of memories you left behind...


The author's comments:
This poem is dedicated in honor of my Gradfather and to show that even through someone dies you always have the memoires.

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RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:20 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks! :D

on May. 22 2010 at 12:52 pm
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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It's beautiful in it's own way.  I love the emotion you put into it by asking where did you go?  I'm really sorry for your loss.

on Mar. 11 2010 at 2:02 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

i really like this poem keep on writng

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 8:07 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
Please rate and tell me what you think about my poem also I wrote many other things to and look out of my newest writing

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 6:02 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks. I wrote it when my grandpa died last year

BirdMan SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 11:38 am
BirdMan SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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This is my favorite poem in your work. Emotion drives the mind of a writer! And it really shows here!

RLJoy said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:55 am
thanks ur writing is amazing to

on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:46 am
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Amazing once again!

I really like how you repeated "Where did you go?" It really added a suspenseful and sad effect to the story.

Keep writing!




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