He's Just...

September 7, 2009
By Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow


He’s just…
A nobody
A loser
A random guy

He’s just…
The guy I just met
The guy I think I’ve fallen for
The guy I have mixed feelings for

He’s just…
Everything I need
Everything I want
Everything I dream of

He’s just…
Sweet one minute
Mean the next
Giving me mixed signals

He’s just…
So frustrating
Such a liar
Such a player

He’s just…
So confusing
So hard to understand
So easy to love

He’s just…
He’s apologizing
He’s admitting to it all
He means it too

He’s just…
So easy to forgive
So easy to be with
Am I going to risk it all?

He’s just…
Every wish come true
Every dream come alive
Every thought now spoken


He’s just…
Sweet
Amazing
Cute
Weird
Annoying
Evil


He’s just…
The world to me
My whole future
My true happiness
(Even If He Drives Me Insane)



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on Aug. 27 2011 at 4:50 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

sorry thats meant to be I like the repition aswel! :)

on Aug. 27 2011 at 4:49 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i like this! i love how the mood shifted throughout the poem, like how she talks about the good and bad things about him. I kie the repition aswel :)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:28 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I really liked this :) good job, i like how one minute his the best and the next the worst (:

on Jun. 26 2011 at 12:31 am
Warm_My_Heart GOLD, My City, Other
13 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around.”
Leo F. Buscaglia

I feel that the repition adds an effect to the writing that is pronounced to the reader. i can relate to this.

 


on Apr. 6 2010 at 4:13 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I think this is good.. not a huge fan of all the repeating but you get the meaning and emotions through- awesome!  ..And i think a lot of people can relate to this

Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 5:05 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
11 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%." -KT

So relatable! Five Stars!


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