we all thought we did it for the best

August 22, 2009
By puppitz14 GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
puppitz14 GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Ill draw a picture
Ill drawl it with a twist
Ill drawl it with a razor blade
Ill drawl it on my wrist


I'm the quiet nice girl who sits in the corner of the room
A girl who is well liked
Yet feels like she's stuck in the dark

I'm the athletic all around cute guy
I get everything I want
And still ask why

I'm the girl who has cuts on my hands
Still they remain
And no one understands

I'm the boy who's picked on and is forever marked a nerd
I get made fun of for being serious
Yet when I try to be funny, people think I'm completely and even bigger nerd

We were all different
yet we all felt the same
That none of us were needed
But we felt we were to blame

We were all in different groups
We all had different labels
But we were all capable of taking our lives
Yet after we left, things stayed the same

We all died
We thought maybe things would change for the people we left behind
But what we didn't know, is that after we died , no matter what we thought we accomplished
No matter how much we thought people would change
No one did
now we are all only memories
People mourn us
People cry
But then they well move on
And a memory is all that we will forever be

Can't think straight.
The pain won't go away.
Why?
How could you?
All these questions running through my head
It's all your fault.
All the pain and heartache.
It's all you.
I loved you.
I dont know what love is anymore.
I don't even think it exists.
All thanks to you.
My whole world crumbled down.
I wanna go, let me die, im begging you.
I just want to end it now.
End all my pain and my suffering.
All caused by you,
and only you.


.
Don’t leave me please!!!!!
I herd you we're leaving
this really is my last chance to see you
I miss you already, when you haven't moved an inch
Memories of times we've had
There all fading now
I can’t sleep
I can’t dream when your gone
so please don't leave
Why does this have to be true?
Why you?
When you leave,
My life will be at an end………….


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puppitz14 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 2:19 pm
puppitz14 GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ill draw a picture
Ill drawl it with a twist
Ill drawl it with a razor blade
Ill drawl it on my wrist

thairs like 3 peoms thair opps i dont really know how i did that lol

on Sep. 15 2009 at 6:24 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
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Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Wow. Made tears brim my eyes.

Lovely.

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 15 2009 at 1:50 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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wow really sad but really deep i feel the pain of the people in the poem

on Sep. 15 2009 at 8:49 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SO SAD BUT SO TRUE

choirchic said...
on Sep. 15 2009 at 12:15 am
that is an amazing poem. i love it. its so true in peoples lives today

on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:27 pm
cheerchicks BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
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I LOVE this poem. Itoatally know where you're coming from




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