The Dance of a Disco

August 21, 2009
By sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
5 articles 4 photos 10 comments

She Is Hurting You,
Like Your Hurting Me.

Or Maybe Your Hurting Yourself,
Then I Too Would Be Hurting Myself.

Or Maybe She Doesn't Kno About The Pain She Inflicts On You,
And Maybe You Don't Kno About The Pain You've Caused Me Too.

Or Maybe You Both Are Horrible People Because Your Fully Aware Of Every Horrible Thing You Do That Makes Me Cry.

Or Maybe You Are So Hurt By Her,
My Pain Has Become Invisable To Your Eyes.

-August 20, 2009


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Emmalee SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 11:02 am
Emmalee SILVER, Rayville, Louisiana
9 articles 14 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans. - John Lennon

The amount of understanding I have for these words is ridiculous. :)

on Sep. 11 2009 at 12:46 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Deep, moving work. It has a flow, and its very relate able. I like it alot! Keep it Up=]

on Sep. 9 2009 at 4:33 pm
sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
5 articles 4 photos 10 comments
Thank You So Much For Viewing My Work. :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 7:03 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

Sure does.

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:53 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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i like the rythum of the poem. it adds alot to it

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:29 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

i know!!! isnt that what usually happens though?

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:28 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

i can absolutely relate to this

u should look at some of mine if u can, thanks.

on Sep. 8 2009 at 4:36 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

I love the way you have created a chain reaction with this. Its only sad because everyone is getting hurt except for that first girl who needs to get hurt.




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