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The Dance of a Disco

She Is Hurting You,
Like Your Hurting Me.

Or Maybe Your Hurting Yourself,
Then I Too Would Be Hurting Myself.

Or Maybe She Doesn't Kno About The Pain She Inflicts On You,
And Maybe You Don't Kno About The Pain You've Caused Me Too.

Or Maybe You Both Are Horrible People Because Your Fully Aware Of Every Horrible Thing You Do That Makes Me Cry.

Or Maybe You Are So Hurt By Her,
My Pain Has Become Invisable To Your Eyes.

-August 20, 2009



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Emmalee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 11:02 am:
The amount of understanding I have for these words is ridiculous. :)
 
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annkaykay2011 said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 12:46 am:
Deep, moving work. It has a flow, and its very relate able. I like it alot! Keep it Up=]
 
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sarahxinsane921 said...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 4:33 pm:
Thank You So Much For Viewing My Work. :)
 
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blingblang4eva said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:53 pm:
i like the rythum of the poem. it adds alot to it
 
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OLIVIA!!!!! said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:28 pm:
i can absolutely relate to this
u should look at some of mine if u can, thanks.
 
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Katherine H. said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 4:36 pm:
I love the way you have created a chain reaction with this. Its only sad because everyone is getting hurt except for that first girl who needs to get hurt.
 
OLIVIA!!!!! replied...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:29 pm :
i know!!! isnt that what usually happens though?
 
Katherine H. replied...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 7:03 pm :
Sure does.
 
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