What You&#39ve Done to Me

Smiles I don't wanna fake
I wanna be able to say
That everything's OK
I would like to say I'm happy
With the person I've become----

If only I could go a week without crying.

Do you see what you've done to me?
All I can do is stay home.
All the clouds in my field are gray
The old oak try no longer dances
The wind no longer blows cause it's afraid
My common ground has caved in,
The air I breath wants to escape
The fire in my heart is burning out,
All the life in it you take
And all that's need to awaken me is one smile---

To make me live again





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AnnHenn said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 5:10 pm
totally know where you're coming from. well done.
 
Suzie17 said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 12:31 pm
I like your style of writing. Don't ever let anyone destroy your dreams (they've tried to do that to me) and tell you you aren't good enough. You are. Keep writing.
 
ariwrites94 replied...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 6:12 pm
thanks! now don't u ever stop either . . . :)
 
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