What You&#39ve Done to Me

August 30, 2009
By ariwrites94 GOLD, Deltona, Florida
ariwrites94 GOLD, Deltona, Florida
17 articles 4 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." ---Plato


Smiles I don't wanna fake
I wanna be able to say
That everything's OK
I would like to say I'm happy
With the person I've become----

If only I could go a week without crying.

Do you see what you've done to me?
All I can do is stay home.
All the clouds in my field are gray
The old oak try no longer dances
The wind no longer blows cause it's afraid
My common ground has caved in,
The air I breath wants to escape
The fire in my heart is burning out,
All the life in it you take
And all that's need to awaken me is one smile---

To make me live again



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AnnHenn SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 5:10 pm
AnnHenn SILVER, Falling Waters, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The way to gain a good reputation is to endeavor to be as you desire to appear.

totally know where you're coming from. well done.

on Jan. 6 2010 at 6:12 pm
ariwrites94 GOLD, Deltona, Florida
17 articles 4 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." ---Plato

thanks! now don't u ever stop either . . . :)

Suzie17 GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 12:31 pm
Suzie17 GOLD, West Monroe, Louisiana
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I like your style of writing. Don't ever let anyone destroy your dreams (they've tried to do that to me) and tell you you aren't good enough. You are. Keep writing.




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