The Ending

August 29, 2009
By OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

The beats echo around me,
and through the surface breaks a magnificent bird.
It takes off, wings glinting a fiery golden blue.

The beats echo around me,
and through the clouds my bird returns.
But, he brings with him the unexpected,
the unknown, and the unwanted.
He brings my nightmares.

The beats echo around me,
and through the impending darkness
I see the changing green eyes search,
they search for whatever else my secret fears may hold.

The beats echo around me,
and through the mist I gaze,
blue eyes piercing black.
My nightmares come at me, taunting me from every angle and reminding me of what I wished to leave behind.

The beats echo around me,
and they crescendo, splitting the ground at my feet.
The giant cavern that my nightmares built for me has finally surfaced,
I can't run, can't climb, can't jump....
I can only sit here, hunched, while they surround me for the final moment-
the moment coming where everything ends!


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on Dec. 28 2010 at 12:07 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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I agree very much this is beautifully written and just flows amazingly! Great work!

Dark Ravyn said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 11:19 pm
Wow, this is beautiful. Great job! ;)

on Dec. 31 2009 at 8:08 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
the way it affected me... how it did.. the way you used your words was wonderful.

but the whole meaning of it, the feel, was saddish and kind of scary.

good!

OurFrost GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 5:53 pm
OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments
Thanks for commenting...I'm curious though, what exactly did you mean?

on Dec. 28 2009 at 1:37 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
I love this. Well, not exactly the way it makes me feel, but how it does is amazing.




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