Youth MAG

By James L., New Port Richey, FL

     O Sun, O Crucible,
That you could make me beautiful.

Winged sandals
I, of the heavy mud
Of riverbeds,
Weigh down into
Gravity’s gaping womb.

I, the child,
I, the heavy,
Am not built
For flight.

Your spots and
Have bestowed no scars.
I have not breathed
Your caustic elements,
Have not quaked
With the tremor
Of your furnace.

I have not sensed the pulse.

Only glimpsed
The corona
Through the fingers
Of my mother,
And shrunk, small
And hollow as the bones
Of a sparrow,
Lamenting my
Iron skeleton.

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i love this so much!

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This piece is brilliant - vivid and figurative, it impresses and stands out! Your talent deserves to be honed and recognised :)

on Sep. 18 2012 at 9:36 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
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- Martin Luther King Jr.

This is so creative! I love how descriptive you were with this piece and the word choices that you used. I also love how engaged this kept me, good job!


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