Economic Breakup MAG

February 12, 2009
By Kelsea Askew BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
Kelsea Askew BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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I didn’t notice, I didn’t see
That our stocks were slowly falling.
We should have thought of liability
And the pain that we were causing.

I didn’t notice, I didn’t see.

They say that time is money
And I guess I didn’t have the budget for you.
There’s no need to be angry
Because I really think you knew.

I didn’t notice, I didn’t see.

We couldn’t afford the loans
Or the favors bought on credit.
My heart is the Dow Jones –
It’s dropped six points; and you just stood back and let it.

I didn’t notice, I didn’t see.

What we had was no more than a transaction
And I think that you declined me.
It’s gonna take more than numbers and fractions
To be what we’re supposed to be.

Now I notice, now I see.

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This article has 31 comments.

skippy john said...
on May. 19 2009 at 6:14 pm
i don't get it....

AnnieB. BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2009 at 3:05 am
AnnieB. BRONZE, Kingston, Other
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This is really good. Keep it up.=)

SaraB. GOLD said...
on May. 17 2009 at 1:27 am
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one" Abraham Lincoln

Holy cow that's good. I wish I could write something so awesome.

on May. 14 2009 at 12:45 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

A creative way to describe this. It gets the point across and is something most hasn't seen before. Nice and sad. But understood

Tayler said...
on May. 13 2009 at 6:35 pm
Tayler, Bowlinggreen, Kentucky
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Wow that was really good.

But thats some breakup you hade there

Catlady SILVER said...
on May. 11 2009 at 6:44 pm
Catlady SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Amazing! That so well written. But I would never want to be broken up like that

on May. 9 2009 at 10:20 pm
Courtney.Firestone BRONZE, Thornhill, Ontario, Other
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Interesting choice of topic! And very well written!

on May. 3 2009 at 2:45 pm
Destinymarina SILVER, Muscle Shoals, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
im the type of girl that will brighten your day when i can\'t even brighten my own

i really liked it it was something original and unique

on May. 1 2009 at 9:19 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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aweosme ;) extremly apporpriate. :) esperically right nowe. very well wrritten.

on Apr. 28 2009 at 1:23 am
GoldenGirl PLATINUM, Vashon, Washington
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I liked the analogy and the repetitiveness of this poem.

on Apr. 27 2009 at 8:22 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

Im just gonna say its good.. i like poems that rhymes.. lol

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