No One

October 30, 2015
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.


I'm alone with no one,
Without another soul,
But I do want someone,
To fill this empty hole.


I want somebody to care,
Somebody I could hold.
Who will twist my long hair,
Who will warm my own cold.


Someone who's gentle and soft
And cares for me lustfully.
And whenever I am lost,
I still have your company.


Someone whose love is warm,
Whose love is tender and kind.
Who's not persuaded with charm
Or the treasures that I find.


If only that special girl
Would show me the light
To the beautiful world,
I would hold her tight.


But I sit in despair,
Like a desperate lost dove,
That is willing to share
A precious gift called love.


The author's comments:

I just wanted to show what I think love is. Enjoy.


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on Apr. 21 at 1:19 pm
Tickle_that_pickle BRONZE, Lovington, New Mexico
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dang doooooooooooooood

on May. 4 2016 at 9:40 pm
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Yes you can totally sing this btw @TheReaderArielle , I have done it at a poetry slam before.

on May. 4 2016 at 11:10 am
TheReaderArielle BRONZE, KILLEEN, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
" Stars can't shine without darkness"- Ali Qayyum

Can you sing this? This is very superb.

on May. 3 2016 at 10:29 am
itsrainingcats GOLD, East Hampton, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Suess

hey mac this is fabulous! keep on writing dude.

on May. 3 2016 at 10:09 am
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
1 article 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always be happy"

hey maculate its very flowy readable.Only some person can do this . Really great job..

on May. 1 2016 at 12:29 am
Camomile_Addison, Non, California
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Great job!

@Emily GOLD said...
on May. 1 2016 at 12:26 am
@Emily GOLD, Marysville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
have fun & die young

This is really good

on Apr. 22 2016 at 2:07 am
StArFish1202 SILVER, Taylor, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Procrastination rules the nation!

Love your style of writing; and this poem is beautiful! Keep writing and don't stop.

on Feb. 11 2016 at 3:56 pm
Poetry101 BRONZE, Faith, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
You don't need anybody to tell you who you are or what you are. You are what you are !













~John Lennon

SO AMAZING love this one a lot ;)

MBC1215 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2016 at 3:29 pm
MBC1215 BRONZE, Chattanooga, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant.It's what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are."-Mewtwo:Pokemon movie #1

THAT IS AMAZING!!!REALLY nice love poem.

on Dec. 28 2015 at 3:50 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
22 articles 8 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates; You never know what you are gonna get.

Beautiful!

on Dec. 17 2015 at 11:50 am
Trench_Coat BRONZE, PERU, Indiana
2 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll survive.
That you won't give up,
no matter what happens,
no matter how hopeless"- Titanic

I am like speechless. No words. Well their are words, but still its amazing. This is a perfect way to think of love as.

Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2015 at 10:14 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

Amazing. I have no words for this but... Wow.

on Dec. 9 2015 at 8:44 pm
winny_addams PLATINUM, Apple Valley, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is found within, don't judge from beauty outside judge the beauty inside

wow that is beautiful

on Nov. 24 2015 at 10:59 am
Breanna_Valentine PLATINUM, Sullivan, Ohio
20 articles 8 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope for the best and prepare for the worst."
"Everything happens for a reason."
Every day do something that will inch you closer to a better tomorrow.
Doug Firebaugh

Wow.Thats all I have to say. Is. WOW.

prolixity GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2015 at 2:47 am
prolixity GOLD, Iloilo City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Even the tallest and most lofty trees have the most reason to dread the thunder.

this is amazing!! check out my work, it's kinda similar to this :))) TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/810451/Nothing-No-One/

on Nov. 6 2015 at 7:57 pm
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
71 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

I wanted to say that my school had a poetry slam today at school and I had decided not only to recite the poem, but to sing it so, yeah I wanted to let people know.

on Nov. 3 2015 at 10:39 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

Its great! Just instead of using 'whose' ,at some places it should have been 'who is'. Anyway your writing style is amazing so keep writing :)


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