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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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JuneTaz said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 5:45 pm
Love how yu took an insult and mixed it with something romantic and sweet. Really sticks out. Four stars!
aurorairis SILVER said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 8:48 am
Great job! You capture this emotion so perfectly!
Please comment on some of my work!
eazybri said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 10:22 am
I love this, it totally relates to what I'm going through right now! nice job!;)
mattisonteeter GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 5:58 pm
This flows so well! I appreciate this poem and you're writting.
This is a pretty generic question but if you get the chance would you mind looking at a few of my poems?
thanks
Adrianna.A. SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 10:21 pm
I really liked this piece, It was well written. :) Good job.
Savannah515 said...
on Oct. 24 2011 at 10:41 pm
Amazing poem! It rhymes perfectly. U should get it published outside of teen ink like when u write a book and get it published. That is what u should do with this poem. Sorry that didnt make any sense.
KeyyRenaee234 said...
on Oct. 24 2011 at 2:49 pm
Great Poem(:
This is very good!!This is exactly how most girls think of guys:)lol I love the whole cocky smirk part.That made me crack up lol and I love the jerk theme to this.When I read this it is as if you are reading my mind.ha I love the rhyme to this, and It all forms together perfectly.You are a amazing writer:)
SammyD.1722 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 9:06 pm
wow I loved it and trust me when I say this is the story of my life :/
fera_lilia SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 4:21 am
This is like the definition of teenage girls lovelife! like seriously, you captured it perfectly
Narene_baby SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 12:08 am
Honestly I love this sooo much! :D It has every girl written all over. If You have time you should check out my poems. Just want some feedback
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