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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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LalalLULUL said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 12:23 pm
OMG THIS IS TOOO TRUE
 
ClaudeTheDemonButler said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 6:12 pm
this is an increadible poem
 
escape-the-insanityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 11:29 am
OMG i love this so much. the fact that i actually just said OMG proves that lol. i don't have to tell you how good it is bc you already have many comments doing that. but this fits a situation i'm in right now to a T.
 
dramagurl13 said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 9:59 am
My guy drives me nuts, but he isn't a jerk. He is super nice- but great poem anyway!
 
ThatMegan said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 7:49 pm
Wow, this is amazing! Great job with emotion and detail! I can totally relate and thought of a situation of mine the whole time! Great job grabing and holding the readers attention! Nicely done, keep writing I would love to read more! You've got talent!
 
MiaUnwriten said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 2:56 pm
Cool, it reminds me of my special jerk
 
Megan_LizFan said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 8:22 pm
This is really good! I can really relate to this! Keep up the good work :)
 
gitfiddleluv13 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 6:04 pm
I really love and understand this poem...I can really relate to it. Great job!!
 
MarleyRainbow said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:06 pm
you love a jerk?? why
 
Ahhoy2 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 1:14 pm
I can understand it, though I was once that jerk.
 
MMorton said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 8:09 am
I relate. I see your point and I can totally get jerks.
 
albealerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 9:08 pm
omg i love this. its awesome and i can totally relate.
 
FK92495 said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 11:57 am
wow i can so relate to this story and am sure most of the girls on earth do. great job!
 
NonexistentRemedies said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:45 am
I love how this poem can relate to 99% of the girl population. There's so many guys out there that are jerks and so many girls fall for them.
 
Michaela M. replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:33 pm
amazing poem ... just great i love reading it from time to time
 
ForeverFlirty22 said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 1:17 pm
I love it! So true! It says what so many of us think. Just great!!
 
Ayyad said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 7:22 pm
I love this poem!! It's soo true!! I would love to hear your opinion on m first an only poem!!
 
AstronutKid said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:32 pm
Whats your # writingchick
 
jollyfriend said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 10:31 am
Amazing where did u cme up wth tht
 
writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 8:43 pm
I especially love the first 8 lines of this. They are absolutly genius and so original! :D
 
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