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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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OldYoungOne said...
on Nov. 15 2012 at 3:28 pm
Funnt how this poem describe the I felt about my past crushes.... I like. Come and see about my poems sometime I'd appreciate the comments and rate
onehappyaster SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 1:27 am
Wow! Incredible! I could relate entirely, look forward to more :D
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 7 2012 at 8:23 pm
I loved this! Great job!
dotsonboy99 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 11:10 am
i liked the line . i love your cocky smile
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 18 2012 at 9:40 am
Very good flow. I liked it a lot.
MSBCBB said...
on Oct. 17 2012 at 10:12 am
The rhyming was unneeded, only a certain amount of words can ryhme. And you're hiding. I don't feel as if this guy is a jerk. This is petty and cliche. The repetition wasn't effective, I felt as if it was kind of redundant.
NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 11:13 am
It is so simple... yet so intense. Totally relateable and sad. i love it.
Misfit95 said...
on Oct. 12 2012 at 7:32 pm
Ah, yes. I had a "jerk" of my own before....As a matter of fact, I was engaged to him at one point...But I learned my lesson. You did a wonderful job with this poem. :)
tatertot15 SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2012 at 2:05 pm
Just as everyone else is saying, it is very easy to relate. I have a 'jerk' of my own
stillhuman SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2012 at 12:08 pm
I love this poem because I think that all teenagers can relate. Very well written and the word choice was beautifully exicuted(:
KeidraB said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 8:33 am
Awesome.....Wonderful Word Choice!!!
remember16 SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2012 at 7:08 am
this is amazing, i can relate to this.... !!!!!
1doodlebug0 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 25 2012 at 2:02 pm
You just made me cry... that sounds just like my ex-boyfriend who is still in love with me and visa -versa...
garshongjasmine SILVER said...
on Sep. 17 2012 at 10:37 am
this is beautiful and well written
bloodykittenz GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2012 at 7:16 pm
check out my posts! i really love writing and want feedback! ill read yours if you comment and rate!
__katherene said...
on Sep. 12 2012 at 9:54 am
this is really nice, and cute.
bethany stubbs said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 7:34 pm
I think that this poem is sweet
