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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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ThatMegan said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 7:49 pm:
Wow, this is amazing! Great job with emotion and detail! I can totally relate and thought of a situation of mine the whole time! Great job grabing and holding the readers attention! Nicely done, keep writing I would love to read more! You've got talent!
 
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MiaUnwriten said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 2:56 pm:
Cool, it reminds me of my special jerk
 
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Megan_LizFan said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 8:22 pm:
This is really good! I can really relate to this! Keep up the good work :)
 
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gitfiddleluv13 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 6:04 pm:
I really love and understand this poem...I can really relate to it. Great job!!
 
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MarleyRainbow said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:06 pm:
you love a jerk?? why
 
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Ahhoy2 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 1:14 pm:
I can understand it, though I was once that jerk.
 
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MMorton said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 8:09 am:
I relate. I see your point and I can totally get jerks.
 
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albealerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 9:08 pm:
omg i love this. its awesome and i can totally relate.
 
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FK92495 said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 11:57 am:
wow i can so relate to this story and am sure most of the girls on earth do. great job!
 
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NonexistentRemedies said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:45 am:
I love how this poem can relate to 99% of the girl population. There's so many guys out there that are jerks and so many girls fall for them.
 
Michaela M. replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:33 pm :
amazing poem ... just great i love reading it from time to time
 
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ForeverFlirty22 said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 1:17 pm:
I love it! So true! It says what so many of us think. Just great!!
 
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Ayyad said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 7:22 pm:
I love this poem!! It's soo true!! I would love to hear your opinion on m first an only poem!!
 
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AstronutKid said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:32 pm:
Whats your # writingchick
 
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jollyfriend said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 10:31 am:
Amazing where did u cme up wth tht
 
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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 8:43 pm:
I especially love the first 8 lines of this. They are absolutly genius and so original! :D
 
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laurensoccerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 8:00 pm:
I love this poem!!!!!! It has a great flow of words. Your personality is easily seen and relatable. Keep writing!!!!!!!!
 
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ginger1993 said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 6:16 pm:
most guys now a days! i loved it!!
 
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YurFutureAuthor68 said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 2:29 pm:
Pretty good. I like it mostly because of the picture 'cuz i love my cowboys ;) but it rhymed some of the time and then kind of faded away, I really like the concept and can tell that you put yourself into the writing, very good just make sure that its not the stereotypical poem about that boy that broke my heart kind of thing. Its very good though. You can tell that this poem is personal so just be careful that people MAY critique negatively, but to me once again, it is pretty good, but I love t... (more »)
 
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thewords This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 2:07 pm:
dopeeeee .
 
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