Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Mar. 20 2009 at 8:22 pm
sumthingspecial BRONZE, New York, New York
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cute and funny

on Mar. 20 2009 at 8:14 pm
LusciousKitten SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is my LIFE, Life is my INSPIRATION

Love it but i think u could use more imagery to get the reader into it more but other than that itz really good

Shadow SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 2:53 am
Shadow SILVER, Sacromento, California
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@$#%!!! I love this peom,

Pie said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 11:37 pm
I would use less end stopping, it makes the rhyme scheme too predictable. Also, use more images and less abstractions, show, not tell.

on Mar. 18 2009 at 4:54 am
EverFate SILVER, Los Alamos, New Mexico
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This is amazing at demonstrating all the junk we can get into when in love, and still be so happy about it! Love is so blind and still so full of life. I can really relate to the whole 'jerk' persona!

silver said...
on Mar. 14 2009 at 8:34 pm
i love it is very nice, awesome rhymes keep om writing

on Mar. 14 2009 at 7:57 pm
its nice to know someone feels the same.guys can be jerks but "love isnt loving the perfect person,its about loving the unperfect person perfectly" it was really cute!everyone has a jerk and i wish you luck with yours:)

tweedle dee said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 11:02 pm
really cute.

on Mar. 13 2009 at 5:50 pm
Jenelle Brazier, Plainwell, Michigan
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This is really really cute! I can relate to this poem because it's about someone i hold close to me too.

Laura Rowe said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 5:49 pm
Laura Rowe, Plainwell, Michigan
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This poem is freaking cute. I can relate to this poem because I feel the same way about someone.

on Mar. 9 2009 at 9:47 am
CABhahahahaHPhahahaTLhaha GOLD, Kamuela, Hawaii
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Guess we all fall 4 the ones we shouldnt, oh well as long as we love loving them

on Mar. 8 2009 at 7:39 pm
Emo_Supergurl BRONZE, Battle Creek, Michigan
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OMG that matches one of the guys in my class =)

on Mar. 8 2009 at 4:26 am
rockmysoxoff25 BRONZE, San Diego, California
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love it(:

your really good

on Mar. 7 2009 at 1:42 am
pianoplayer BRONZE, McHenry, Illinois
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I really like this poem =] Nice Job =]

vb*playa*37 said...
on Mar. 7 2009 at 1:34 am
This is REALLY good! Your an amazing writer!!! [=

on Mar. 7 2009 at 12:15 am
girl, i know exactly how you feel (= i loveeee thisss !

on Mar. 6 2009 at 1:47 pm
Markeita BRONZE, Lake, Michigan
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I LOVE it! It reminds me of some of my work that I have at my house! It's AMAZING! And I, I, I just LOVE it!!!!

on Mar. 6 2009 at 6:56 am
carrie aalberts BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
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i love this poem!

i can totally relate:]

on Mar. 4 2009 at 6:10 pm
Melissarae9590 GOLD, Mesa, Arizona
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Awh! This is a very cute poem(:

I love it!!

on Mar. 4 2009 at 5:52 am
lexikeys247 SILVER, Forks, Washington
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LOVE IT! probably every girl knows exactly what you are saying!




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