Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Apr. 5 2009 at 2:35 pm
phavi1995 SILVER, Sacramento, California
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omg , I love this poem , will you also check out mine ?

TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/93928/Hush--its-mine/

on Apr. 3 2009 at 11:13 pm
SimplicityDefined GOLD, Rogersville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"A man can no more diminish God's glory by refusing to worship Him than a lunatic can put out the sun by scribbling the word 'darkness' on the walls of his cell." -C.S. Lewis

Oh I love this...applies to me actually :)

EMILEEEEEE said...
on Apr. 3 2009 at 5:17 pm
omg i love this ,

u should write like wayy more poemzz. :) there soo amazing ..

on Mar. 31 2009 at 7:28 pm
aaron daniels BRONZE, Webster Groves, Missouri
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good job

raeann<3 said...
on Mar. 31 2009 at 6:06 pm
i absolutely love this its funny, meaningfull and cute!

on Mar. 30 2009 at 9:34 pm
XX-LYSSALU-XX BRONZE, Greenwood, Delaware
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Thats pretty good. Like the ryhmes =] brava

on Mar. 30 2009 at 3:34 am
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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That was absolutely amazing! I liked it a lot.

NatalieB. GOLD said...
on Mar. 28 2009 at 11:35 pm
NatalieB. GOLD, Loudon, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Make your own lines, and color outside of them.

This is beutifull. It really Captures the loving hte you get out of a relationship.

ACooke GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 10:59 pm
ACooke GOLD, Ihiohh, New Jersey
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This is the scary truth of the players that obviously know their way around the heart

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on Mar. 27 2009 at 4:38 pm
Keasha GOLD, Fairmount, North Dakota
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I have a boy that everyone else seems not to like but i see him differently. He can be a jerk sometimes but i learn to live with him. I found a nice jerk, too. Keep up the good writing and hope you go far. This poem is right from the heart and deserves a 5 star rating.

on Mar. 26 2009 at 10:06 pm
Miss_Independent GOLD, Keller, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked.

I LOVE THIS POEM! It's so original yet so familiar. It is a true 5 star poem.

on Mar. 26 2009 at 3:53 am
stacycakes BRONZE, Plattsburgh, New York
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i love this. i read it in the magazine. its what made me decideto actually submit my work. THANK YOU

on Mar. 25 2009 at 9:32 pm
Sheebs PLATINUM, Oxford, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You can look for love all you want but in the end love will always be right beside you.

I know exactly how you feel. Me and my friend Teezy are both having problems with guys write now that we have become infatuated with but that make us wonder how come we fell for them. I'm glad it's not just us. This is deep and you should keep on writing!!!!!!

on Mar. 25 2009 at 5:19 pm
xXTearxStainedXx BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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i related well to it, but seems a little sing songish. still good though! ^_^

on Mar. 25 2009 at 5:02 pm
.Misted.Ma SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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great! gave me chills each time i read it, and i read it over and over. its very insightful to those who have not yet felt this part of love.

very great!!! <3

on Mar. 24 2009 at 3:03 pm
mamacassx33 BRONZE, Rotterdam, New York
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wow.....thats amazing...like no lie....gave me chills

on Mar. 22 2009 at 4:43 am
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you do will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."

i like it (:

on Mar. 21 2009 at 6:56 pm
Jacqueline SILVER, Dayton, Ohio
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little cliche... doesn't stay on topic

on Mar. 21 2009 at 6:12 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

this is a great poem. I know a couple guys like that...

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on Mar. 21 2009 at 4:32 pm
ssophiaa GOLD, Falls Church, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"You cannot operate from a concern of how you're perceived."
--Kevin Kittle

This is a cute poem. I like it.


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