Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Apr. 22 2009 at 5:38 pm
I really really LOVE this poem! it reminds me so much of my very own jerk.. i mean eww.. such a jerk.

on Apr. 21 2009 at 7:53 pm
Te-Roy-Say BRONZE, Apopka, Florida
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Yes, I like this poem as well!

I can some what relate,

my situation is a bit different though! Haha

But, Yeah Girl, Keep it up!

on Apr. 20 2009 at 1:38 am
Rebecca Pitts SILVER, Quinlan, Texas
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Ilove your poem and it hlped me understand a hard time I was going through with a guy at my just like you described in the poem im a poetry writer myslf and a hard critic but all i have to say about this poem INCREDIBLE!!!!!! LUV IT B)

Batwoman GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2009 at 9:30 pm
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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Wow that was so amazing I know a lot of guys like that too

on Apr. 18 2009 at 4:20 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
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That is an really GREAT poem!!!

Ciara Murch said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 8:41 pm
Ciara Murch, Buffalo, New York
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Ya i know someone like that

Lili said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 10:24 pm
This is a cute honest poem i really LOVE it keep it up

KGS95 SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 1:02 pm
KGS95 SILVER, Waynesboro, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
things do not change, we do.

ha ha very very good you are a writer to be this sounds like my ex boyfriend but oh the things us girls can get attached too.

SarahNearol said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 11:01 pm
You have quite a knack for rhyming. Good job. I love rhyming poems, they are my favorite type and this one just captured my attention immediately. You're terrific!

on Apr. 11 2009 at 10:21 pm
horseluva BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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ur writing is amazing!!!keep it up!!!

Menie7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 9:50 pm
Menie7 GOLD, Toa Alta, Other
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jaja great poem.! really straightforward. :).

sasuke468 said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 7:44 pm
i can totally relate love it

dot.! BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 2:31 pm
dot.! BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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i looooooove it! i can totally relate! its amazing! can you please tell me what you think of my work too??

its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped

thanks! and again urs was a relllly good poem!! seriously!

K.H.P. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2009 at 11:53 pm
K.H.P. BRONZE, Talala, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"What are you?" -- 'Agile! Mobile! Hostile!'
"What is pain?" -- 'French bread!'
"What is fatigue?" -- 'Army clothes!'
"WILL YOU EVER QUIT?!" -- 'NO! We want some mo'! We want some mo'!'
-Remember the Titans

I read this in the magazine and it was an insta-fav. ;] It's just so cool to finally find a community of people who share in my interests. Good job!!

candy said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 5:39 pm
very good poem so great!!!!!! and awesome so cool

DoLL_F@C3 said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 11:34 pm
DoLL_F@C3, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"FORGIVING YESTERDAY, LIVING FOR TODAY, NOT WORRIED BOUT TOMORROW." Doll

this is great

Ruthey GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 10:45 pm
Ruthey GOLD, West Midlands, Other
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I LOVE THIS!!! its so honest. and sweet. and true. and reminds me of how i've felt myself.

LilJ<3 GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 10:07 pm
LilJ<3 GOLD, Gloucester, Virginia
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I loved this poem. It was real, sincere, and honest. You are a great poet. Best of luck in everything you do :).

Jackie.

on Apr. 6 2009 at 10:54 pm
lele6123 BRONZE, Batavia, Illinois
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This is good, but if you want to get better you may want to try writing more free verse. Sometimes, trying to commit to "singsongy" rhyme schemes really limit your creativity.

ZoeR. GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2009 at 10:52 pm
ZoeR. GOLD, Redlands, California
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i Really love this poem. I read it in the mag. It sticks out in a good way. Its a great poem, its all the way up there with Poe and Dickinson.... and it so applies to me.


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