Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Mar. 12 2013 at 11:28 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
― Dr. Seuss

truth be told i know that same feeling

on Mar. 7 2013 at 9:45 pm
NadiaFilanovsky SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens" --Jimi Hendricks

This piece like put tears in my eyes. It describes so much of my life! Haha! FIVE STARS!

on Feb. 27 2013 at 7:20 pm
KatelynHanks GOLD, Henderson, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
nothing last forever

And this everybody is my life! haha thank you for writting this... its great (:

Moz1116 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 10:38 am
Moz1116 BRONZE, Beecher, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Trust yourself. Create the kind of self you will be happy to live with all your life." - Golda Meir

I think every single girl can relate to this. So good!

on Feb. 17 2013 at 8:58 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Wow! :) Amazing

on Feb. 16 2013 at 10:36 pm
WistfulThinking PLATINUM, Kiln, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
'Behind him, across vast distances of space and time, from the place he had left, he thought he heard music too. But perhaps it was only an echo.'- The Giver by Lois Lowry

I can't believe how much I can relate to this! This is really great:)

forever1218 said...
on Feb. 7 2013 at 7:31 pm
forever1218, Sdasdasdas, New York
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Love this piece, it perfectly describes that even though you know someone is an absolute jerk, you still cant help but want him. When you step back and think about it it's really extremly silly but all us girls find ourselves doing it and no one knows why

little boy said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 2:59 pm
why did you name it jerk

awray0 GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2013 at 11:32 am
awray0 GOLD, Seymour, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“Be very careful if you make a woman cry, because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man’s rib: Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved.”

live laught love

hope is love and forgivness

live life as if you die tomorrow

fake it till you make it

face up to the music an grab the bull by the horns

you never lose by loving you lose by holding back

its alright letting yourself go as long as you can get yourself back up

she never gave up on my mom is my hero

my mom had a great deal of trouble with me but i think she enjoyed it

i dont judge you for what you belief in so why judge mine.

I really like this poem I find myself cominng back to read it all the time.  

on Jan. 30 2013 at 2:49 pm
DarkAngel101 GOLD, Birmingham, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't count your tears, they mean only sorrow. But count the ones you hold back, which are your strength that makes you stronger."

I like the poem. It describes my friend alot. i will make sure he comes and read this poem.

on Jan. 29 2013 at 2:13 pm
KaitlynMarie24 BRONZE, Cairo, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

This is an amazing piece of poetry please check my poem out, and tell me what you think

on Jan. 29 2013 at 1:47 am
musicisthegoodlife GOLD, Daegu, Other
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amazing work -simple yet relatable! Keep writing~

on Jan. 24 2013 at 11:31 am
Marlea_1997 GOLD, Nebraska City, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
words have no meaning if not for the horror of their reality- Edgar Allan Poe

Absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!

on Jan. 6 2013 at 4:26 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

This was fantastic!!!! And please read, rate, and comment on some of my stories. It means a lot to me :)

on Jan. 1 2013 at 8:39 pm
Becausethesunsup SILVER, Richmond Hill, New York
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Favorite Quote:
We accept the love we think we deserve
-Perks of Being a Wallflower; Stephen Chboksy

I adore this. I really do. I feel as though these were the words I had been so desperate to set to paper when I had been experiencing this.

Ghoshy said...
on Dec. 25 2012 at 4:44 pm
Ghoshy, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Success is no accident. It is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice, and most of all, love of what you are doing or learning to do.
-Pele

It's really great... good job!!!

Shonna GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2012 at 5:23 pm
Shonna GOLD, Phoenix, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"the most dangerous moment comes with victory."

Girl, never was spoken any truer words.

on Nov. 26 2012 at 5:07 pm
Puzzle PLATINUM, Orem, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons,
Eat them.
They do not taste that bad.

Life is like autumn.
Stop to crunch the pesky leaves.

Love is... let me think...

Don't judge a book by its cover.

Poetry is a way to put words to things that are unexplainable.

Yeah... I suppose I am this jerk. I have been told it too many times, and when my friend told me to read this poem on teenink, I was hurt. Thank you... you have brought me back to reality and that helped me more than you can believe.

OldYoungOne said...
on Nov. 15 2012 at 3:28 pm
Funnt how this poem describe the I felt about my past crushes.... I like. Come and see about my poems sometime I'd appreciate the comments and rate

on Nov. 15 2012 at 11:18 am
Mickey17 SILVER, Life, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
“Be the change that you wish to see in the world.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

this really made me think. thank you




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