Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Jul. 12 2013 at 2:44 pm
Isibeal19 PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
*Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning how to dance in the rain.*

This is so creaative! 

on Jul. 8 2013 at 12:44 am
MeganGuiney SILVER, Congers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”

I LOVE THIS!  So clever & relateable, good job! :)

on Jun. 30 2013 at 7:08 pm
hrofficial BRONZE, -, California
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Favorite Quote:
"There are multiple sides to all of us. Who we are -- and who we might be if we follow our dreams." -Miley Cyrus

I wish I wrote this. It's so funny and so true.

on Jun. 9 2013 at 6:19 pm
justkiddinguniversity BRONZE, Palmdale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Its not what it is, its what it can become."
-The Once-Ler

i know right?!

on Jun. 9 2013 at 6:18 pm
justkiddinguniversity BRONZE, Palmdale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Its not what it is, its what it can become."
-The Once-Ler

so you've never liked a guy/girl(don't know your sexual preference) thats kind of rude, but you can't help but like him?

on Jun. 9 2013 at 6:16 pm
justkiddinguniversity BRONZE, Palmdale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Its not what it is, its what it can become."
-The Once-Ler

That was a great poem. A lot of people can relate to it, including me! Keep writing poems and stay awesome!! :)

on May. 10 2013 at 12:49 pm
feliciasmith BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
live today like your going to die tomarro

mine to   

on May. 9 2013 at 12:09 pm
AmericaBeauty, Beebe, Arkansas
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Love it. really good and lovely

on May. 8 2013 at 11:42 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
― Dr. Seuss

This poem is very cool and compleatly understand I hope you are happy with that person. :) 

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on May. 7 2013 at 9:38 pm
AshleighML, Blacksburg, South Carolina
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I absolutely love this poem ! It like describes my whole situation right now . As soon as I read it, I was like, dang !

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on May. 3 2013 at 10:18 am
Jen4197 BRONZE, Mays Landing, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes people are beautiful
Not in looks.
Not in what they say.
Just in what they are.

It made me laugh:) I love this poem:)

on Apr. 29 2013 at 4:25 am
devan1223 BRONZE, Desert Hot Springs, California
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Favorite Quote:
"nothing gold can stay"

awesome poem!!! also if anyone one could check out the poem i just put up thanks!! (:  

on Apr. 22 2013 at 9:08 pm
DoNotRegretThyFall SILVER, Wayzata, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
You may tell a tale that takes up residence in someone's soul, becomes their blood and self and purpose. That tale will move them and drive them and who knows what they might do because of it, because of your words. That is your role, your gift.

This is great! I would appreciate if some of you guys would check out the poem I just posted and would rate it. Thanks!

on Apr. 15 2013 at 6:57 pm
beccalynn1663 GOLD, West Milford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Let your smile change the world. Don't let the world change your smile.

This is incredible!

on Apr. 15 2013 at 6:04 pm
saracouturier SILVER, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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Hey, I am new and would appreciate it if you could read my poems. Thanks if you do!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 2:28 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Hey im pretty new, please check out my work. Thanks  

on Mar. 27 2013 at 1:51 pm
poetrystar SILVER, West Liberty, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring

this was rly good i made my ex shane read it

on Mar. 25 2013 at 1:30 pm
writergirl36 GOLD, Chattanooga, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning how to dance in the rain!"

I am in love with this poem and can relate. You are an amazing writer!!! Keep writing!!!! If you get the chance could you please look at my poems and tell me how I could make them better. I understand if you don't have time. Thank you.

on Mar. 15 2013 at 1:56 pm
GinryuStargazer BRONZE, N/A, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
This world is just a battleground for ideals.

I cannot relate to this. I have a lot of 'jerks' as friends, but that's usually because they are intriguing--most unconventional people tend to be. Guy and girl jerks, the lot of them. This is my warning; the flow and rythmn was good. Some more vibrant word choice--ones that are dripping in anger and others in admiration--could very well portray the frustration you want to express.

on Mar. 12 2013 at 11:28 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
― Dr. Seuss

truth be told i know that same feeling


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