Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Isibeal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2013 at 2:44 pm
This is so creaative! 
MeganGuiney said...
Jul. 8, 2013 at 12:44 am
I LOVE THIS!  So clever & relateable, good job! :)
hrofficial said...
Jun. 30, 2013 at 7:08 pm
I wish I wrote this. It's so funny and so true.
justkiddinguniversity said...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 6:16 pm
That was a great poem. A lot of people can relate to it, including me! Keep writing poems and stay awesome!! :)
feliciasmith said...
May 10, 2013 at 12:49 pm
mine to   
AmericaBeauty said...
May 9, 2013 at 12:09 pm
Love it. really good and lovely
KassandraMichelle263451 said...
May 8, 2013 at 11:42 am
This poem is very cool and compleatly understand I hope you are happy with that person. :) 
AshleighML said...
May 7, 2013 at 9:38 pm
I absolutely love this poem ! It like describes my whole situation right now . As soon as I read it, I was like, dang !
justkiddinguniversity replied...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 6:19 pm
i know right?!
Jen4197 said...
May 3, 2013 at 10:18 am
It made me laugh:) I love this poem:)
devan1223 said...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 4:25 am
awesome poem!!! also if anyone one could check out the poem i just put up thanks!! (:  
JustADreamerGirl said...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 9:08 pm
This is great! I would appreciate if some of you guys would check out the poem I just posted and would rate it. Thanks!
beccalynn1663 said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 6:57 pm
This is incredible!
Sara C. said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 6:04 pm
Hey, I am new and would appreciate it if you could read my poems. Thanks if you do!
Bluetooth said...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 2:28 pm
Hey im pretty new, please check out my work. Thanks  
poetrystar said...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 1:51 pm
this was rly good i made my ex shane read it
writergirl36 said...
Mar. 25, 2013 at 1:30 pm
I am in love with this poem and can relate. You are an amazing writer!!! Keep writing!!!! If you get the chance could you please look at my poems and tell me how I could make them better. I understand if you don't have time. Thank you.
GinryuStargazer said...
Mar. 15, 2013 at 1:56 pm
I cannot relate to this. I have a lot of 'jerks' as friends, but that's usually because they are intriguing--most unconventional people tend to be. Guy and girl jerks, the lot of them. This is my warning; the flow and rythmn was good. Some more vibrant word choice--ones that are dripping in anger and others in admiration--could very well portray the frustration you want to express.
justkiddinguniversity replied...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 6:18 pm
so you've never liked a guy/girl(don't know your sexual preference) thats kind of rude, but you can't help but like him?
KassandraMichelle263451 said...
Mar. 12, 2013 at 11:28 am
truth be told i know that same feeling
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