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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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KatelynHanksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 7:20 pm:
And this everybody is my life! haha thank you for writting this... its great (:
 
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Moz1116 said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 10:38 am:
I think every single girl can relate to this. So good!
 
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RazzieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 8:58 pm:
Wow! :) Amazing
 
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WistfulThinkingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 10:36 pm:
I can't believe how much I can relate to this! This is really great:)
 
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forever1218 said...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 7:31 pm:
Love this piece, it perfectly describes that even though you know someone is an absolute jerk, you still cant help but want him. When you step back and think about it it's really extremly silly but all us girls find ourselves doing it and no one knows why
 
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little boy said...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 2:59 pm:
why did you name it jerk
 
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awray0 said...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 11:32 am:
I really like this poem I find myself cominng back to read it all the time.  
 
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MissRedPoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 2:49 pm:
I like the poem. It describes my friend alot. i will make sure he comes and read this poem.
 
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ktopakian15 said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 2:13 pm:
This is an amazing piece of poetry please check my poem out, and tell me what you think
 
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musicisthegoodlife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 1:47 am:
amazing work -simple yet relatable! Keep writing~
 
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Marlea_1997 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 11:31 am:
Absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!
 
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In_Love_with_WritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 4:26 pm:
This was fantastic!!!! And please read, rate, and comment on some of my stories. It means a lot to me :)
 
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Becausethesunsup said...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 8:39 pm:
I adore this. I really do. I feel as though these were the words I had been so desperate to set to paper when I had been experiencing this.
 
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Ghoshy said...
Dec. 25, 2012 at 4:44 pm:
It's really great... good job!!!
 
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Shonna said...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 5:23 pm:
Girl, never was spoken any truer words.
 
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Caleb S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2012 at 5:07 pm:
Yeah... I suppose I am this jerk. I have been told it too many times, and when my friend told me to read this poem on teenink, I was hurt. Thank you... you have brought me back to reality and that helped me more than you can believe.
 
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OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 15, 2012 at 3:28 pm:
Funnt how this poem describe the I felt about my past crushes.... I like. Come and see about my poems sometime I'd appreciate the comments and rate
 
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Mickey17 said...
Nov. 15, 2012 at 11:18 am:
this really made me think. thank you
 
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onehappyaster This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 1:27 am:
Wow! Incredible! I could relate entirely, look forward to more :D
 
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jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 7, 2012 at 8:23 pm:
I loved this! Great job!
 
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