Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Mar. 29 2011 at 7:43 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let what you can't do stop you from doing what you can do.
John Wooden
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
Eleanor Roosevelt

Wow this poem speaks the TRUTH!! love the last stanza! "a yet you're the best jerk i see" =) Also the flowing is good. GReat Poem!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 3:17 pm
Jennifer_Krasinski BRONZE, Decatur, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love hurts if you do it right; you can cry when you get older.

My exboyfriend is perfectly described in this poem. I love it:) keep writing!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:11 pm
Faerie-Dreams BRONZE, Sheffield, Other
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything-Wiseman in Sucker Punch

I'm also going through this right now, I was in a relationship with this guy who I absolutley adored. He was my first real love. It's over now, I was heartbroken when he ended it. It was earlier on this year and I'm with someone else now but I still think about him and I love it when he is around

on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:07 pm
I'm going through this right now and this means alot to me

rae_bae GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:06 pm
rae_bae GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
13 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is short. Break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably! And never regret anything that made you smile..."

(: Makes me feel good that I'm not the only one who falls in love with the jerk... 

on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:33 am
Shayball SILVER, Gooding, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the rest of the world wondering how the hell you did it.

 Really cute. :)

on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:08 am
Shelbslee SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
You never really understand a person, until you consider things from their point of view; until you climb into their skin and walk around in it."
-Atticus Finch from To Kill A Mockingbird

I just went through this, and i loved it. It made me feel so not alone, I loved, but I also hate that it is so so true.

IM SO SEXY said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:05 am

this is awsome i love this

 


yourmoamama said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:03 am
this is so nice i was balling my eyes out

wrthh said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:03 am
this was nice i almost cried

on Mar. 29 2011 at 6:23 am
lonleywriter SILVER, Coram, New York
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."

So amazing! I fell in love with it, and I can absolutely relate to it. Great job :D

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:28 pm
BeccaLeigh13 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life to the fullest"

I really love this poem. I can totally relate to this and i think a lot of other people could to. Great job.

on Mar. 25 2011 at 1:18 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

ok i am a bit...creeped out because the guy i have hopelessly fallen for is such a jerk, he dumped me and asked for me back and my dumb self came back lolz wow you like wrote my life haha, and he has brown eyes and brown hair gr

on Mar. 24 2011 at 10:09 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
7 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

oh my goodness i absolutly loved this! there is this guy that i ahve been in love with for 3 years and he has curly brown hair and beautiful brown eyes...

on Mar. 22 2011 at 8:32 pm
decayingorganicmatter SILVER, Wellington, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are not special. We are not crap or trash, either. We just are. We just are, and what happens just happens." --Fight Club

She spelled two words wrong, go away.

on Mar. 22 2011 at 5:04 pm
ashyshadow BRONZE, Quinlan, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
eyes are the window to your soul

i remembr reading this in one of the issues

 i love it =)


on Mar. 22 2011 at 10:04 am
Dreamer_2012 BRONZE, Mountain Home, Arkansas
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dreams worth living for are dreams worth fighting for.

Wow this was a really amazing poem! Good Job =)

asiapooh110 said...
on Mar. 21 2011 at 9:45 am

omg disz poem isz like i love it and it makes seens

 


on Mar. 20 2011 at 6:03 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow. This is great! I'm sure its gotten to the point where you can't even keep up with all the comments! :P I hope one of my poems can reach this level where the audience is in the thousands! Great work :)

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on Mar. 19 2011 at 10:07 pm
TheGoodTwin, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.

--Shakespeare

Buy a dictionary, Yasminno_O, and read it please. 


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