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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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lonleywriter said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 6:23 am
So amazing! I fell in love with it, and I can absolutely relate to it. Great job :D
BeccaLeigh13 said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 1:28 pm
I really love this poem. I can totally relate to this and i think a lot of other people could to. Great job.
fragileblackorchid said...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 1:18 pm
ok i am a bit...creeped out because the guy i have hopelessly fallen for is such a jerk, he dumped me and asked for me back and my dumb self came back lolz wow you like wrote my life haha, and he has brown eyes and brown hair gr
msoccerm345 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 10:09 pm
oh my goodness i absolutly loved this! there is this guy that i ahve been in love with for 3 years and he has curly brown hair and beautiful brown eyes...
Dreamer_2012 said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 10:04 am
Wow this was a really amazing poem! Good Job =)
asiapooh110 said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:45 am

omg disz poem isz like i love it and it makes seens


GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Wow. This is great! I'm sure its gotten to the point where you can't even keep up with all the comments! :P I hope one of my poems can reach this level where the audience is in the thousands! Great work :)
tinabeana24 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 7:17 pm
OMG i love this poem i can SOOOO relate to it!! Good Job i also love how like the reader can feel/get wat ur saying keep up the good work!! (:
thecrystalbudz replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 11:12 pm
i love it!
Yasminno_O said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 6:01 pm
these is really good, I love how you discribe the feelings
TheGoodTwin replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 10:07 pm
Buy a dictionary, Yasminno_O, and read it please. 
decayingorganicmatter replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:32 pm
She spelled two words wrong, go away.
Nerd34 said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:07 pm
Loved it!!!
l.iney said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:36 pm

This is really good and I can sense the feeling in it.

ps check out some of my stuff please :)

colas said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 5:30 pm
wow so true i fall for these gays all the time
WritingJulia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 6:29 pm
I love it!!  How long ago did u compose it? 
jellyboo said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 1:40 pm
you are a good writer and i hope that you get a cute boy even if he is a jerk.
Maximum said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 7:29 pm
It's funny-for lack of better word-how often the above happens! Sad, but true!
ambermoore said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 6:50 pm
This is really good
Bookworm7 said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm
This is exactly my predicament. Please keep writinf. This was really great.
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