Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

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CeceE14 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 10 2015 at 8:24 pm
CeceE14 BRONZE, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:

Your comments are nice, but it's NOT funny. This happens to real people all the time, and is one of the worst things a little girl can go through. This is an amazing poem, but it's not funny to have your heart broken

on Feb. 5 2015 at 10:30 am
Christinaa_jean, Renwick, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I asked god for a bike, but I know god doesn't work that way. So I stole a bike and asked god for forgiveness." -Al Pacino

I love the simplicity

DizzyDasey said...
on Feb. 4 2015 at 5:50 pm
So cool... using as a poem In class

on Jan. 22 2015 at 11:00 am
Ashesfalldown GOLD, Groveland, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty... Madness is genius..." -Marilynn Monroe

So creative!!

on Dec. 27 2014 at 4:45 am
SpazzinOverU SILVER, Dehradun, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Keep clam and Carry On....

this poem is so relate able!! Lovely!

on Nov. 24 2014 at 8:46 pm
Enigmapleet BRONZE, Calicut,kerala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Believe in yourself.........

Simple and stylish  

on Nov. 23 2014 at 11:57 am
abomnibal BRONZE, Leeds, Other
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
for freeeeeeeeeeee

wow this is just amazing! it made me smile for ages after first reading it. and i have to keep re reading it.

emkay1223 said...
on Nov. 8 2014 at 4:15 pm
emkay1223, Swansea, South Carolina
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This is so relatable!! I love the untainted honesty of it. I really enjoyed it.

WinterGirl said...
on Oct. 31 2014 at 7:19 pm
WinterGirl, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird."-The Notebook

Wow! That is stunning and so relatable, I loved it!  

on Oct. 6 2014 at 1:15 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Haha, oh geez. This is just absolutely, wonderful and amazing and funny. I'm sorry, but I just found this funny. Haha, oh geez. After I read this, I could not help but laugh and smile, a lot. This is just, all in all, phenomenal. Haha, I love it. I don't know how when this was published, but congrats having this published! You deserve it. You're a talented and wonderful writer and person; you ahve talent and greatness in you. Never stop believing that, because you are and you do. Thankl you so much, for sharing this. 

on Sep. 24 2014 at 10:01 pm
StephanieIsShe, New Orleans, Louisiana
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Awe i can definitely relate to this when I had a crush on this guy

lovekilz said...
on Sep. 23 2014 at 9:10 pm
lovekilz, New Castle, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If neurotic is wanting two mutually exclusive things at one and the same time, then I'm neurotic as hell. I'll be flying back and forth between one mutually exclusive thing and another for the rest of my days.”
~ by Sylvia Plath, (from The Bell Jar)

@carlmarks15: "Good try though! If at first you don't succeed, try, try again! :)" Really?! While I couldn't agree with you more about this poem and how it was written - I'm no fan of cliche topics and forced rhymes myself - I do think it was pretty phony of you to unleash such a harsh barrage on this person's work, only to follow it up with that little quip at the end: "Try, try again" - Like you think that'll make her feel any better? After having you tell her basically that her poem sucks and that it isn't even worth 1 star out of 5, among other things? You know, the poem may indeed suck, and I completely agree when you say it lacks originality. But you really didn't have to be so harsh. I mean, you did pretty much insult this person's work. And then to follow all that with your syrupy condolences: "Good try though!" Well, here's a tip for the future: leave the fake sincerity out of it. If you can't even be sincere in the rest of the post then don't wait until the very end to be 'nice' about it. Man, am I glad nobody shot my work down like this when I was first starting out, or else I probably would've stopped writing for good, right then and there. But anyway, your comment was less of a real critique (pointing out both the weaknesses and strengths of the poem, -plus- offering up good ways to improve the poem in general), and more like just you being unnecesarily harsh. "Good try though!" (Now do you see how that feels more like a slap in the face?)

on Aug. 9 2014 at 5:11 pm
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

awwww! so sweet. and true

on Jun. 3 2014 at 7:13 pm
booklover1234567 SILVER, Augusta, Maine
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Love it!!!!

on May. 24 2014 at 12:21 pm
abomnibal BRONZE, Leeds, Other
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
for freeeeeeeeeeee

this is the best thing i will ever rad and have ever read  it makes me feel better about the people i love but i know will never love me back. i think you might like my poem heart beat free verse :)

Kay.P said...
on May. 18 2014 at 6:23 am
So true i can relate it reminds me of a jerk i know

on May. 8 2014 at 1:53 pm
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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its so true!!!!!!!!!

dmax108 BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2014 at 2:41 pm
dmax108 BRONZE, Burley, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
love all, trust a few, do wrong to none.

why do u love it

dmax said...
on May. 5 2014 at 2:33 pm
i know first hand how tru this story rings to alot of people

on Apr. 17 2014 at 12:03 pm
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments
love it!!!

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