Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Apr. 19 2011 at 9:49 pm
I love this poem! The descriptions are fabulous and I wish I can write like this. There is a also a good rythm in this poem when I read it aloud.

S1a1j BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 9:02 pm
S1a1j BRONZE, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I am here for a purpose nd dat is to grow into a mountain not to shrink 2 a grain of sand and henceforth will i apply all my efforts 2 bcome da highest mountain of all nd i will strain my potential until it cries 4 mercy! lol!

wow! I love this poem. The subject matter is really simple yet fantastic and very relatable.

on Apr. 18 2011 at 4:32 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

This poem was insanely rrealistic, omg, I love how the topic was so relatable. BTW, if you have time, please check out, comment on, and rate my poems, The Girl Inside, Remembering Spring, and You Are the Lyrics In Me. Thanks so much!!! 8)

on Apr. 17 2011 at 7:35 pm
Eleganta123 BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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im in the same situation. Hes a cute jerk. well done :D .

Emelyx3 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2011 at 6:22 pm
Emelyx3 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
When iWas 5. My Mother Told Me That Happiness Was The Key To Life. When iWent To School They Asked Me What iWanted To Be When iGrew Up. iWrote Down " Happy " They Told Me iDidnt Understand The Assiqnment. iTold Them They Didnt Understand Life. - J.L

This Poem Is Amazing. iLove It. ♥

on Apr. 15 2011 at 8:24 pm
This was an awsome poem i loved it!!!

PenInHand GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 6:29 pm
PenInHand GOLD, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" Kemps!"

I LOVE IT. IT'S AWESOME.

GraceSanchez said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:31 pm
GraceSanchez, Bronx, New York
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Aww i love this poem :') this is soo cute

Melody Velez said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:24 pm
Melody Velez, Bronx, New York
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lml alinaaaaaaaa HUH-TSSS

Melody Velez said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:23 pm
Melody Velez, Bronx, New York
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Hey! Your poem is really sweet. I really like it. I can really relate to it. I LOVE IT!!

on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:20 pm
alinaakahotmama BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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i like this poem matter fact love it it show that even though hes a jerk you still love him that is very meaning ful

on Apr. 15 2011 at 12:40 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

This poem was very interesting and unique. I loved how it's about something most teenage girls can relate to. If you have time, please check out and comment on my first poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!

jacob nonya said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 11:10 am
weird poem

on Apr. 14 2011 at 7:55 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

uhm the best poems come from expiernece and our own life, you dont have to read it ya know.

on Apr. 14 2011 at 7:53 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

shes not saying hes an actual JERK, well she is but shes saying shes in love with a jerk. If you were a girl you'd understand billy.  Shes not saying all boys are jerks and that girls dont take things to the heart, shes saying shes inlove with someone who is most likely a jerk.

on Apr. 14 2011 at 3:11 pm
Squitchy96 SILVER, Mmuskogee, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Carpe Dium.

This poem makes so good! I can totally relate!

billy said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 10:45 am
i dont know why you would say anything about guys being jerks. cause im sure they are just messing around with you and then girls take are to heat so i think boys are the nicest people

on Apr. 12 2011 at 5:36 pm
mredman928 BRONZE, Canton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"All things can be done through Christ who strengthens me!"

This is absolutely great!! :) I LOVE it!

on Apr. 12 2011 at 10:28 am
lovebeatles18 SILVER, Greenfield, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
i used to think that anyone doing anything weird was weird, now i know that it is the other people that call others weird are weird--- Paul McCartney

well i know for a fact that most poems people write relate to their own problems. and those poems are the best

on Apr. 11 2011 at 8:25 am
TabbiJane PLATINUM, Rockwood, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live."






--Albus Dumbledore

I. LOVE. THIS


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