Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on May. 27 2011 at 7:09 pm
amandanicole BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 articles 4 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

this is amazing, i love it. hope the jerk see this

on May. 25 2011 at 4:06 pm
JakkiieLovee BRONZE, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"You can do it!"

I can so relate! It's a well written poem! I like! (:

on May. 25 2011 at 2:31 pm
SuperSami97 BRONZE, Urbandale, Iowa
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I really like this poem!  You write so your reader can relate easily.  Reread your last stanza and consider the rhythm of the last 2 lines.  There might be a better way to end it, so it still rhymes but the rhythm stays the same as the entire poem.

on May. 24 2011 at 11:24 am
Rissakay BRONZE, Harmonsburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't beat yourself up"

i agree! (:

on May. 20 2011 at 10:18 pm
EmoLovingHer PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree; it will spend it's whole life thinking it's stupid. -Albert Einstein

very cute.. and nice pik choice

genesis c said...
on May. 19 2011 at 11:12 pm
especially that my boyfriend is one too , welll ex :T

on May. 19 2011 at 11:34 am
ofpaintedroses GOLD, Berne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"How long is forever?"
"Sometimes just one second."

IF YOU READ MY COMMENT I'LL BE HONORED. JUST SAYING. BUT THIS IS THE MOST LIKE-ME POEM I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. IT SO FITS ME AND MY NOT SO GREAT....FRIEND.

 

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


sabyy said...
on May. 19 2011 at 9:05 am
sabyy, Richmond, Kentucky
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this is a really cute pom!!:)

on May. 16 2011 at 7:41 pm
StacieTonissen SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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wow this is a great poem

hennessey84 said...
on May. 16 2011 at 1:41 pm
i think this poem is great keep writing

on May. 15 2011 at 7:23 pm
Victoria Bowman BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I feel like it's not as well written as many poems on this website that were not published, and the wording is a bit akward sometimes.

on May. 14 2011 at 3:23 pm
katiex2334 SILVER, McHenry, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The morning wind forever blows, the poem of creation is uninterrupted; but few are the ears that hear it."- Henry Thoreau

This is absolutely fantastic! I love it!

on May. 12 2011 at 7:26 pm
TheBeautifuUglyStupidJerk SILVER, Blue River, Oregon
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haha i can realte as well. ironically he has the same brown hair, and he has stupid jokes lol XD

on May. 12 2011 at 4:27 pm
Mee too!!!!:)

on May. 12 2011 at 1:55 pm
mkelleyy19 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" yesterday was history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. that is why it is called the present."

i can completely relate to this poem! there are so many sweet guys in the world, yet we always for the jerks!!

on May. 12 2011 at 1:29 pm
this is very touching i say just keep talking to her and things will go ur way! trust me i can read a girl better then i can read a book!

on May. 12 2011 at 11:29 am
Marina_V.S. BRONZE, Weybridge, Random Island, Other
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ah, I'm one of those weird people who goes through their note books just to read the quotes, so finding a fav is hard for me... 'There is no pleasure in having nothing to do; the fun is in having lots to do and not doing it' - Mary Little ;)

She does like him, but just because she likes him doesn't mean he's not being a jerk. Try rereading the poem and paying attention to all the words, try to feel what kind of emotions would lead you to say those exact words.

Anyway, great job, this peice actually digs quite deep into the complications of love. Congrats on getting into the magazine :)


on May. 12 2011 at 8:25 am
Just kidding I absolutley LOVE this story :)

leah said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:25 am

I loved this story! its just amazing very good. What great writer!

:D


DyLaN lAmPoS said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:24 am
I <3 Leah!


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