Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

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marissa87 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 3:36 pm
this poem speaks the words rolling through my head. AMAZING:) i wish i could write this good,but check out my poems and some of the pictures i uploaded. WOW!
 
Miranda14 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:53 pm
OMG SISTER YOU ARE THE BOMB!
 
Ginayx3 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:54 pm
Word up Sista . Get it .
 
Miranda14 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:55 pm
Get Whattttttttt?
 
Ginayx3 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:56 pm
You the rhyme, the rythum the great poetry .
 
Kelli_2011 said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 3:38 pm
Oh my goodness I am soo in love with this poem it's everything what i go through with my crush WOW! AMAZING!:]
 
Julez1D1 said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 12:25 pm
Precious jerk-so true:)
 
msprincess said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 9:55 am
Nice poem 
 
Mz.Minny2011 said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 9:30 pm
*cute* :) ..................
 
gothchick1995 said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 6:39 pm
I love this poem because I can completely understand where your comming from, I'm in a very similar place
 
poet.lover said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 7:24 pm
I love how it's so simple, yet holds so much meaning (:
 
Nasra689 said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:21 pm
i really like this poem, it should be a song cuz its the type of ryme you get in your head. great job keep up the good work :)
 
Ashley M. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 9:08 pm
you should check out my poem Briar Rose, ive never posted anything before and i'd appreciate any comments!
 
LunaIsNotHere said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 6:09 pm
I loved this poem! I know a guy who TOTALLYYY fits this description:)
 
LetsPretend said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 12:41 am

I love this poem so much i just re-read and re-read it =)

Hey by any chance can you guys tell me what you think of my poem To The Last Pedal...

Keep up the good work! <3

 
Angie.Hudak This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 2:39 pm
LOVE IT[: people can be such asses sometimes, and to put it in a poem, amazing! Check out some of my writing if you get the chance :D
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:54 am
It was was AWESOME!!! great job! (Sorry for advrertizing) I just wrote two stories called nightstalker and the beast. If anyone could check them out and post some comments and feedback that would be great. Thanks! and keep writing everybody! :)(:
 
katherinetwizzee replied...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 12:59 pm

your poetry is awesome. <3

 

 
Curly_Sue said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 5:21 pm
Awesome! Very creative.
 
LifeWrite This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 4:01 pm
This is great! I love the way you use the word "jerk" in an affectionate way. :) I can totally relate to that!
 
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