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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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forever.dancing said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:08 am:
soooooooo cute :)
 
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birdcage2 said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:50 am:
this is really good i can totally relate great job!!! keep it up
 
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roliepoliezoie said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 7:44 pm:

My God, this is awesome. *Favorited!*

:)

 
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lovelele said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 11:51 am:

i loved this poem so much i used it for school lol for a poetry projcet

 

 
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Brim369 said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 11:03 am:
i love this poem.  i read it every time i log on! great work!
 
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amandanicole said...
May 27, 2011 at 7:09 pm:
this is amazing, i love it. hope the jerk see this
 
K.M.S.Shear replied...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 8:04 am :

great poem

 

 
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JakkiieLovee said...
May 25, 2011 at 4:06 pm:
I can so relate! It's a well written poem! I like! (:
 
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SuperSami97 said...
May 25, 2011 at 2:31 pm:
I really like this poem!  You write so your reader can relate easily.  Reread your last stanza and consider the rhythm of the last 2 lines.  There might be a better way to end it, so it still rhymes but the rhythm stays the same as the entire poem.
 
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Rissakay said...
May 24, 2011 at 11:24 am:
i agree! (:
 
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KyotoLoveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 19, 2011 at 11:34 am:

IF YOU READ MY COMMENT I'LL BE HONORED. JUST SAYING. BUT THIS IS THE MOST LIKE-ME POEM I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. IT SO FITS ME AND MY NOT SO GREAT....FRIEND.

 

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
ArachniPhillia replied...
May 20, 2011 at 10:18 pm :
very cute.. and nice pik choice
 
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sabyy said...
May 19, 2011 at 9:05 am:
this is a really cute pom!!:)
 
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Staciemarielewis said...
May 16, 2011 at 7:41 pm:
wow this is a great poem
 
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hennessey84 said...
May 16, 2011 at 1:41 pm:
i think this poem is great keep writing
 
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Victoria B. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2011 at 7:23 pm:
I feel like it's not as well written as many poems on this website that were not published, and the wording is a bit akward sometimes.
 
birdcage2 replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:51 am :
you just don't know good poetry when you see it.
 
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katiex2334 said...
May 14, 2011 at 3:23 pm:
This is absolutely fantastic! I love it!
 
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mkelleyy19 said...
May 12, 2011 at 1:55 pm:
i can completely relate to this poem! there are so many sweet guys in the world, yet we always for the jerks!!
 
Littlecupcakedancer replied...
May 12, 2011 at 7:26 pm :
haha i can realte as well. ironically he has the same brown hair, and he has stupid jokes lol XD
 
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