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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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inkflowerKNC said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 2:33 pm
this actually made me laugh. in a good way. i like it because its realistic. :D
 
brender1017 said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 12:19 pm
i lie this and i can so relate to it !! i loved this !!
 
PassionFruit said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 5:05 pm
I like it, simple yet strong. As you can tell, a lot of people can relate, including myself :) It reads smoothly and inspires emotion in the reader, makes the poem feel personal. Great job! 
 
RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 11:17 am
that's a really good peom and its deep and personal which makes it all the best!
 
Isabel96 said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:56 pm
Your simplicity is really compelling. Tranquil yet emotional. 
 
Dodson said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 8:55 pm
that was really good. nice job!
 
IDKXmere13 said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 6:41 pm
Aww this is really good! :) i have a jerk with brown hair that im in love with too! :)
 
shinegirl24 said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 12:28 pm
Aw.... I really like this. Nice job!
 
spency said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:38 am
this is brilliant...5/5
 
forever.dancing said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:08 am
soooooooo cute :)
 
birdcage2 said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:50 am
this is really good i can totally relate great job!!! keep it up
 
roliepoliezoie said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 7:44 pm

My God, this is awesome. *Favorited!*

:)

 
lovelele said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 11:51 am

i loved this poem so much i used it for school lol for a poetry projcet

 

 
Brim369 said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 11:03 am
i love this poem.  i read it every time i log on! great work!
 
amandanicole said...
May 27, 2011 at 7:09 pm
this is amazing, i love it. hope the jerk see this
 
K.M.S.Shear replied...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 8:04 am

great poem

 

 
JakkiieLovee said...
May 25, 2011 at 4:06 pm
I can so relate! It's a well written poem! I like! (:
 
SuperSami97 said...
May 25, 2011 at 2:31 pm
I really like this poem!  You write so your reader can relate easily.  Reread your last stanza and consider the rhythm of the last 2 lines.  There might be a better way to end it, so it still rhymes but the rhythm stays the same as the entire poem.
 
Rissakay said...
May 24, 2011 at 11:24 am
i agree! (:
 
KyotoLove said...
May 19, 2011 at 11:34 am

IF YOU READ MY COMMENT I'LL BE HONORED. JUST SAYING. BUT THIS IS THE MOST LIKE-ME POEM I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. IT SO FITS ME AND MY NOT SO GREAT....FRIEND.

 

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
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