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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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dreamerz said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 5:19 pm
It's good. =) Hey can you guys send feedback and rate my work? I just posted a poem... my real screen name is ElleNicole and my little poem is Change. For some reason I can't post comments using my actual screen name... anyway, thanks if you check it out, I need a ton more feedback!
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:18 am
 I love tgis and I love the picture this is great is deserves to be in the magazine do u think u could look at some o fmy work it would mean a lot coming frm someone who's been in the magazine. do u get in my having the greatest poem or what?
 
spanky said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 6:50 pm

this is such great poem especialy sence im just now gettin over a guy that sounds just like that! (:

 

 
Mz.Minny2011 said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 5:36 pm

awww. reminds me of my first love

 

 
AmbiguousNature said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 3:31 pm
I love that I finally found a place to write and be heard... Thank you teenink. :]
 
scream2bheard said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 3:11 pm
this is beautiful, this is my life right now
 
Blooddrinker9755 said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 7:36 pm
This tottaly reminds me of a ex-boyfriend. I love it!!
 
shadowrider said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 7:10 pm
I love it! I can totally relate!
 
LauraDanielle said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 2:55 pm

i love the line ' your love does kill the things i hold so close to me'

this is very poetic and relatable, i loved it!

 
Two_Hands_And_A_Heart said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 2:02 pm
Fantastic!
 
WeAllBurn said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 1:53 pm
this is amazing <3
 
EmilyKnowlton said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Brilliant. Simply Brilliant. I love this so much. I know a guy just like this, I can relate so well.
 
xelawriter97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 1:29 pm
This is great!
 
introducingshelby said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:51 pm
You speak the truth...
 
akzfreedom said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 7:44 am
lol its as if  you read my mind!
 
inkflowerKNC said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 2:33 pm
this actually made me laugh. in a good way. i like it because its realistic. :D
 
brender1017 said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 12:19 pm
i lie this and i can so relate to it !! i loved this !!
 
PassionFruit said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 5:05 pm
I like it, simple yet strong. As you can tell, a lot of people can relate, including myself :) It reads smoothly and inspires emotion in the reader, makes the poem feel personal. Great job! 
 
RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 11:17 am
that's a really good peom and its deep and personal which makes it all the best!
 
Isabel96 said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:56 pm
Your simplicity is really compelling. Tranquil yet emotional. 
 
Dodson said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 8:55 pm
that was really good. nice job!
 
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