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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Stephanie P. said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 1:00 pm:
This was an amazing poem that anyone could relate to in life. Great use of imagery
 
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Austin Mags said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 1:08 am:
This was very simple, yet very good. Thank you so much for sharing.
 
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PrincessSparkleStar said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 6:31 pm:
This is one amazing poem!! I'm sure many people can relate to it! Please check out my work, too!
 
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vazenitran98 said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 2:58 pm:
Gosh! What an amazing poem! I never read a poem like this,AT ALL!
 
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KayKay6 said...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 2:00 pm:
this is like THE best poem i have read so far..describes my life so perfectly and it's really well written, i don't think anybody could have put this any better.
 
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MadamPoetry said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 9:13 am:
It's perfect, dude. I love how simple it is, but it gets the point across.
 
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Gabazyzen said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:53 pm:
its crazy how feelings grow and its amazing how you can love everything about guy even if he's a complete jerk ! its so weird but it happens !
 
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Esraa said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:49 pm:
i love this poem, and most people can relate to this, its really lovely!
 
Gabazyzen replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:52 pm :

I AGREE

 

 
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foreverlove said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 1:21 pm:
haha i so get where your comming from. This is really good keep up the work.:)
 
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Caroline S. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 8:23 pm:
This is so good...so relatable.
 
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introducingshelby said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 4:05 pm:
Aw... be nice d:
 
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andieyup This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 10:26 am:
Unoriginal bubble poetry about a cheesy romance. Chunky rhymes with no artistic qualities whatsoever 
 
introducingshelby replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 4:05 pm :
Aw.. that's not nice..
 
Rheanne96 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 4:39 pm :
if you don't like it keep it to yourself! i thought it was great!
 
spagooter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 1:48 pm :

uh, in the real world critics won't hold their tongue to save hurting one's feelings. i think the author is grown up enought to know that

cheers

 
StarryRoss replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 4:57 pm :
you're definitely right! Maybe not about everything you said, but guys, c'mon you can't be a real writer without getting some critique. Some skills and arts in life are like "If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all!" Writing is not one of them. If all you want is undying praise and you're scared of critique, then please don't post your work to the public. Everyone is going to get critiqued in their lifetime, and it would behoove you to at least consider their rema... (more »)
 
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Fia-fia said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 9:45 am:

THis is actually really good! I really like it, and it is understandable. Thank you

:)

 

 
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Sharkbaitwhohaha said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 9:44 am:
Hands and Strand do not rhyme. It was an okay poem, try to work on it.(needs some editing)
 
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spagooter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 5:54 pm:
not very good
 
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