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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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ninjanessie said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 1:16 pm:
AWESOME! It is great! thought it reminds me of a jerk i know...... :) made my day
 
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EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 7:50 pm:
I love this, it's easy for anyone to relate to and it's very well put. Bravo!
 
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M-star said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 10:48 pm:
It's amazing how relatable this is, truly, to anyone. Great job!
 
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Emilyourstruly said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:46 pm:
that is a very incredible and cute poem!
 
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DayDreaamer said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:13 pm:
Wow this is like totally a situation I am in right now.. Haha when I read this it just made me smile! Good job, I like it (:
 
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AriElise said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 6:38 pm:
This has a quiet beauty and I love it. :)
 
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PRDGirl94 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 11:02 am:
This is how i feel about my ex. You get it right on the point :)
 
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Stephanie P. said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 1:00 pm:
This was an amazing poem that anyone could relate to in life. Great use of imagery
 
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Austin Mags said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 1:08 am:
This was very simple, yet very good. Thank you so much for sharing.
 
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PrincessSparkleStar said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 6:31 pm:
This is one amazing poem!! I'm sure many people can relate to it! Please check out my work, too!
 
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vazenitran98 said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 2:58 pm:
Gosh! What an amazing poem! I never read a poem like this,AT ALL!
 
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KayKay6 said...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 2:00 pm:
this is like THE best poem i have read so far..describes my life so perfectly and it's really well written, i don't think anybody could have put this any better.
 
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MadamPoetry said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 9:13 am:
It's perfect, dude. I love how simple it is, but it gets the point across.
 
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Gabazyzen said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:53 pm:
its crazy how feelings grow and its amazing how you can love everything about guy even if he's a complete jerk ! its so weird but it happens !
 
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Esraa said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:49 pm:
i love this poem, and most people can relate to this, its really lovely!
 
Gabazyzen replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:52 pm :

I AGREE

 

 
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foreverloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 1:21 pm:
haha i so get where your comming from. This is really good keep up the work.:)
 
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Caroline S. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 8:23 pm:
This is so good...so relatable.
 
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introducingshelby said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 4:05 pm:
Aw... be nice d:
 
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andieyupThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 10:26 am:
Unoriginal bubble poetry about a cheesy romance. Chunky rhymes with no artistic qualities whatsoever 
 
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