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What hurts more than not talking to someone you love,

is when you talk to them and know they don't want to,

what hurts more then telling them you love them,

is when they say it back and you know its not true,


what hurts more than your memories,

is knowing we wont make more,

what hurts more than the future,

is knowing you wont be what the future has in store.


what hurts more than listening to this sad song,

is knowing that I cant leave,

what hurts more than these tears,

is the fact that I cant breathe.


what hurts more than me writing this,

is the fact that you may read it and not care,

the fact that these words are just that,

nothing that you'll ever have to bare.


what hurts more than the past...

is reliving it everyday in my head,

knowing that the present sucks,'

because I'm remembering everything that you said.



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PadoodalleeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 11:38 pm:
The truth is so hard to know and you did a great job of showing it. Your rhythm and rhyming made it flow smoothly. But mostly you just did a great job saying what you meant to say. Great job
 
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gothgirl99 said...
today at 4:19 pm:
i really like this
 
ValleyMae13 replied...
today at 6:26 pm :
thank you very much. I really appreciate that you took the time to read it.
 
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