What Hurts More

April 19, 2013
By ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who Endure, shall be saved" Mark 13:13


What hurts more than not talking to someone you love,

is when you talk to them and know they don't want to,

what hurts more then telling them you love them,

is when they say it back and you know its not true,


what hurts more than your memories,

is knowing we wont make more,

what hurts more than the future,

is knowing you wont be what the future has in store.


what hurts more than listening to this sad song,

is knowing that I cant leave,

what hurts more than these tears,

is the fact that I cant breathe.


what hurts more than me writing this,

is the fact that you may read it and not care,

the fact that these words are just that,

nothing that you'll ever have to bare.


what hurts more than the past...

is reliving it everyday in my head,

knowing that the present sucks,'

because I'm remembering everything that you said.


The author's comments:
What hurts more is the truth, or maybe not knowing the truth.

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on Apr. 24 2013 at 11:38 pm
Padoodallee GOLD, Haven, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." -Michelangelou

The truth is so hard to know and you did a great job of showing it. Your rhythm and rhyming made it flow smoothly. But mostly you just did a great job saying what you meant to say. Great job

on Apr. 24 2013 at 6:26 pm
ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who Endure, shall be saved" Mark 13:13

thank you very much. I really appreciate that you took the time to read it.

on Apr. 24 2013 at 4:19 pm
gothgirl99 BRONZE, Manvel, Texas
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i really like this


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