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September 2, 2008
By yourlonelylover PLATINUM, Harrington Park, New Jersey
yourlonelylover PLATINUM, Harrington Park, New Jersey
26 articles 1 photo 3 comments

They say after heartbreak, a haircut
A clean slate for every mistake
But now I’ve no hair left for cutting
And even less heart left to break



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SmileyHaley said...
on May. 22 2010 at 5:23 pm
SmileyHaley, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." -Audrey Hepburn

Fantastic!  So short and simple, but yet so deep.  I love it.

on May. 20 2010 at 8:01 am
yourlonelylover PLATINUM, Harrington Park, New Jersey
26 articles 1 photo 3 comments
thank you so much!

on May. 20 2010 at 7:56 am
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

about 5 million stars

blippi SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 8:36 pm
blippi SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the words the happy say are but paltry melody, but those the silent feel are beautiful"-Emily Dickinson

wow!

I love the simplicity of the words

And the comlexity of the emotion

Probably my new favorite poem on this site

BBMMSjr said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:46 am
that is a good poem but how can u walk like that in your picture

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:37 pm
Lord_Limitless BRONZE, New Bern, North Carolina
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i can relate.

cass said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 10:35 am
simply beautiful.

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:39 am
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
MY quote: "Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!"

Wow, so little words and so much detail and emotion! Good job! Keep writing! :D

on Oct. 12 2009 at 7:34 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

I feel the same way. and this ballad is really well written.

on May. 9 2009 at 3:10 pm
one_of_a_kind_girl GOLD, N/A, California
16 articles 0 photos 58 comments
that is so sad, but very well written. now i look at the whole haircut after heartbreak idea in a whole new way

on Apr. 5 2009 at 7:14 pm
yourlonelylover PLATINUM, Harrington Park, New Jersey
26 articles 1 photo 3 comments
thank you everyone who enjoyed it!! please keep supporting my work if you can, i appreciate it so so much! :D :D

bbbbbbbbbbb said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 4:07 am
that was really clever

and cute(;

Megg Ello said...
on Feb. 16 2009 at 1:00 am
this is beautiful. it's pain, simple, true.

the candyman said...
on Dec. 13 2008 at 11:34 pm
short and awesome, just the way I like it. There should be more stuff like this out there.

anabananaz said...
on Dec. 3 2008 at 11:19 pm
BEAUTIFUL. it was the best poem ive read so far

tiger2012 said...
on Nov. 25 2008 at 6:41 pm
i love this poem! i hate getting my haircut!

crazimang99 said...
on Nov. 24 2008 at 4:44 am
True Story.... exactly how i did it..

xcskaterx said...
on Nov. 15 2008 at 10:12 pm
this is a really awesome poem i love it! it fits my life i think thats why i like it so much

jsjmommy said...
on Nov. 3 2008 at 5:46 pm
i really like this poem itz about every thing im going throuh rie now


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