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They say after heartbreak, a haircut
A clean slate for every mistake
But now I’ve no hair left for cutting
And even less heart left to break

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 3:30 pm:
Really cool~ Short and direct with so much meaning. 
 
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Tremendous said...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 10:28 pm:
so short, but perfectly descriptive. cuts right to the core. amazing.
 
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eliana924This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 9:30 pm:
Wow, this is so chilling. It's one of the best short poems I've ever read. My favorite line is, "But now I've no hair left for cutting."
 
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DebbieSham said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:38 pm:
Wow! Short but extremely true and vey deep! I love it:)
 
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irishlass317This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 11:39 pm:
this is very true!! I really like it :-)
 
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panda97 said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 10:15 am:
its so true its like sayin gthe more sins u make the less forgives u get or somthing i love this poem its so true
 
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HollerGirl26 said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 2:31 pm:

Chills!!! Extremely good writing..keep it up <3!

 

 
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ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 11:01 am:

This is really good(:

If you have time could you check some of my poems out and comment.?

 
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can_you_keep_a_secretThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 29, 2011 at 11:07 am:

Beautiful.

I love how you can express that type of feeling in 4 stanza's . Two thumbs up!

 
can_you_keep_a_secretThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 29, 2011 at 11:08 am :
Pahaha . i mean 4 lines...(:
 
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Shelb said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 12:06 pm:
this is sooo great omg!!! But i dont get it.. kind of.
 
DifferentTeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 5:40 pm :
Same here. Its an amazing poem, I love it. But I'm not really sure what its saying. I thought maybe it was something about cancer because "no hair left" but than maybe just about love because of the last line.
 
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Alasia said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 2:11 pm:
i think it's great. sweet,short,straight to the point. bravo!!!
 
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buggzbunnie said...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 9:53 pm:
this is good id like to see a longer piece of yours you have potiential . maybe a little more emotion would make it alot better
 
shelb replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 12:08 pm :
yeah a little more emotion
 
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cnoevilspeaknoevilhearnoevil said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 12:02 pm:
I love this poem, it shows real emotion. =)
 
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RomeofreeJuliet said...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 1:26 pm:
Short and sweet!
 
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mindfreak said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 8:01 am:
Very emotional and awesome ilove it %%
 
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mandaloreP said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 8:25 pm:
short simple and beautiful.
 
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lab96 said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 9:48 pm:
Sadly, I didn't understand the poem, could someone explain it to me?
 
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