Burn It Up

November 13, 2011
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Let it burn
Bring it down
Even as the world turns
Into empty, ashen ground.

Where nothing stirs
The worlds grown cold
And even while it burns
Spirits haunt their empty homes.

If the dead could talk
What would they say?
Look through the fog
And see what lay.

Or just give in
And light it up
Watch it end
And call it quits.

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FULLSTOP said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:26 am
its really food. i gave it a four out of five not cos i didn't like it, but because i thought that u should check the sylabbles in some of your lines. try and make a beat alll the way through your ballad. it's really good, i was wondering if you could have a look at some of my work and comment on it. thanks! x
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